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Whispers [repost from #3, 1 year ago today]
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Whispers [repost from #3, 1 year ago today] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Whispers Listen to the softness of a whisper ~ cushioned by your lips, close to my ear. Ecstacy fills my heart, rising it high on my mind, blanketing all other thoughts. Trees bending slightly under the push from the breath of a pagen god of long ago... it too whispers to me... but not the same words. For does a wisp of breeze have a meaning for I? The faded smell of lost perfume and roses still lingers silently. The whisper is still there, as are memories you’ve given me. The wonderment of you never ceases, can’t die, always lives. Whisper once more words that will not stay, but silently be remembered like a pagan god’s. After that, my love, Goodnight. Circa 1969 ©KRJ 29 September, 1999 Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karilea this is beautiful, so perfect I'm speachless. No truly I'm totally awestruck. Take care Marsha  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
All this whispering going on and not an ear in sight.  Oh well....just have to try to find some colorful wings to rest my words on. Excellent write my friend. Lot's of passion in this one. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
And what a beautiful whisper it is...Karilea, as usual, this is amazing. I am glad that you re-posted this, I missed it the first time  Take care, "sunshine" of our lives Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, if I post in Critical Analysis, will you follow me there and tell me what you really think? Adore your comments always {~,^} thank you! Mark, pass a cornfield, you should have a great audience...LOL...couldn't help myself, sorry...{~,^} Melissa, not for one moment do I think folks would go back into the archives and hunt me up...I'm just glad you read when you can! Thank you! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
a few moments ago - replying to a new post of yours - I said you were getting better - Let me correct that - you have always been great -- this proves it! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Yeats, I do believe you can make me blush...thank you! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is beautiful Sunshine. Thank you for bringing it back. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ WOW!!  I am so blown away. This is wonderful -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Eloise, thank you for coming in to read...I'm glad you don't mind a repost... SEA, blown away? You give me pause to smile...thank you! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
Speachless. and Awestruck. two very good words for this beautiful poem indeed fair maiden |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Loneheart, I accept your kind reply, thank you Sir... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Karilea, shhh. . . can you hear it? beautiful my friend. . . just beautiful. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is just beautiful.... I found myself getting lost in the whispers.....Greeneyes |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
7 opens in one year...WOW.. time flies when were lost in poetry LOL hey...i cant be blamed for filling em all up too fast LOL ...i didnt come here till 5  but this proves the point of how great reposts are... lets us catch some rays of sunshine we missed back then this is a sunburst of poetic perfection later-make me need my sunglasses gator jm |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, Greeneyes, JM...thank you all... JM, sending shades... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Tears_of_Grace Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 50 |
I can easily echo the praises of the others here, this is beautiful. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karilea, Critical Analysis, I really can't bear to go there, I know I'm a coward. It's the first word that puts me off, you know Critical, no I can't do it. I think that each poem has it's merits, and I know we're all learning and the best way is from our mistakes. But still, what right has anyone to say this is wrong and this is right. So unless I grow a tougher skin, and I can't see that happening, Critical Analysis will have to do with out me. (but if you ever do post a poem there Kari let me know, I won't give it any criticism, and I sure as hell can't analyse, but I can come and wave a flag) Take care Marsha  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tears of Grace, thank you for your lovely comment... Marsha, when you're comfortable, I know you will come...for we're all building it! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I still can hear whispers in my ears!!!!!!!Sunshine,loved it!!!!!!!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Vandana, thank you...whispers just seem to linger longer, don't you agree?... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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