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With This Tear |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~*sighs*~ Well, I just couldn't stay away from my family here at passions. I've only been away a week and it seemed like an eternity. I think that my muse is back I am single, but I wrote this poem to my "future husband." I am a romantic and I have hope that someday I will meet him (fingers crossed)  ~WITH THIS TEAR~ On this day, I stand before you and breathe destiny, you are my hope, my fantasy, the fulfillment of my wishes to begin a new cradled in the arms of love With this vow, I pledge to love unconditionally to honour and cherish you, to be your lover and your best friend, these sacred vows shall have no end With this ring, I thee wed uniting two hearts as one, knowing that God brought us together to live in this divine heaven as angels, our bond shall never cease like the eternal circle of love our rings hold, ever golden as a lifetime of marriage to come With this smile, I give to you my faith and hand to you my heart so that you shall hold them both gently and sigh a whisper of trust into love's air, so that we shall stand beside each other for better or for worse as husband and wife With this kiss, I give to you my soul to express my undying devotion sealing our vows to taste romantic bliss for, you are the most beautiful man to ever grace this earth, I am proud to be your bride, fate dances at the touch of our lips With this rose, I hand you my first gift as your wife, I give to you my passion and exchange mine with yours as marriage is both beautiful and giving, we must share our lives with acceptance and understanding as these petals shine red, a symbol of our lasting love With this tear, I marry thee and create happiness and a family, you will remain the other half of my heart 'til death do us part With this tear, my love for you shall forever be, I am yours today, tomorrow and always, you're all I'll ever need With everflowing tears, I thee desire, adore and respect Dreams do come true... God answered my prayer, my waiting is over, I found you You are my greatest love and my last love, you are the one and only true love, you are my everything, you are my treasure - that rare pearl discovered in an endless sea of friendship and love My husband, I love you so *By Melissa Honeybee* The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Judging by this YOU will not be single very long. This is exquisite and some lucky guy is going to cherish this and you very very very much. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you Mark, I had a feeling that you would be one of the first to welcome me back and reply  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ And I'M NEXT ! ! ! You have written future promises waiting to be kept ... Beautifully done, young lady ! This is just lovely. Someday ..... someday And I'm still gonna be around to chortle ... 'I TOLD YOU SO' ! *Hugs* n' all that jazz ! Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
My, my, my this was AWESOME Melissa! I hope you save this one and treasure it until that day happens! That would be so KEWL to hand him this and say I wrote this for you, long before we met! I love it! It's everything it should be and more! BRAVO!!!!!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, Welcome back!!! This was fabulous!!! Truly a beautiful piece of poetry written from deep within your heart. I agree, some day you will find him!!! Wonderful writing!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW Melis, this is so beautiful...so sincere full of promise and anticipation ... YEPPERS ... your muse is back .. and so are you ... and hey .. ya dont have to explain not being able to stay away to ME LOL just ask my warden wonderful poem.. you need to send this to Hallmark ... start your own line of cards Honeybee's Honeymoons later-weddingbells-gator me ps..thank you for the e-mail... i would have missed it (being in "rehab") i replied to it there |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
What Knight could resist such a warm and passionate heart indeed lucky shall he be when thy true love ye do find beautiful work Melissa |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Melissa~ this is like something out of a movie! I love this!! How stunning. -SEA |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Absolutely gorgeous and so sweet Melissa...I'm glad to see your muse has returned and is helping your produce such wonderful words! *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW!! little Melissa's back with a vengence. This is fabulous, so heartfelt and with such love and respect within the words. Melissa this is breathtakingly beautiful...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Melissa, Great to see your muse return. I am still waiting for mine. A beautiful poem, I can see the lines starting to form to your door step right now and I am in there somewhere. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you so much everyone, this poem is very special to me and I plan on saving it in a drawer until I find him Thanks for reading and replying!Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is so beautiful and passionate Melissa. That lucky guy will read this soon, I'm sure. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Melissa my dear, now remember...moderation in all things...except for the love of your husband to be, whenever he comes... I have a feeling you will see it in his eyes... welcome home. Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Eloise and Karilea - Thank you so much! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I knew that you couldn't stay away from us Melissa!! This. . . was absolutely beautiful. . . there's really no other word for it. . . just beautiful. . . And, I would love to be in the chruch when you read these words to that very lucky man. . . for that will truly be a day to remember. . . Welcome back my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
This is truly beautiful. The man of your dreams will come someday and when he does he will be a very, very lucky man. Fantastic writing! |
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