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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Just a little something I wrote while wasting time between classes. A little story, and a little rhyme That is how I spend my time No books of knowledge for to study To cloud my thoughts and make them muddy Just a pen and paper do I need And open heart to do the deed To take the pen and write the word So that my voice may yet be heard Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
now this is very profound indeed, and your right it's just a little time we need to let the pen supply the words that so incessantly runs through our mind if only we could catch the wheels that turn and have them toss out the words that seem to at times get caught up in this cob web, so your right on when you say it's my time. This is really good. |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
Make your voice heard! Absolutely! While learning in classes it is very important to keep a part of your mind clear and unmuddy for just time for yourself. Keep the clouds away from this part of you! Short and sweet but also deep, I love the poem. Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Ah, I can relate to this so well! Wonderful piece of poetry!  --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Thanks for replying to my poem. RB: Sometimes all we need is that little bit of time to ourselves to tink to make the words come. (But I sometimes have to resort to banging my head against my desk to get the wheels turnin. Waverly: you know how muddled my mind is all the time. I dont realy need school to make it any more so. j/k. Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
THat was a neat little rhyme Ketih. Write more between classes if that's what comes out! "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Keith...this is a sweet little verse you have here...I really like it |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
well it wasn't wasting time, when you wrote this. lovely piece. charisma |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Keith~ "To take the pen and write the word So that my voice may yet be heard" This is a great poem....I liked these lines the best. -SEA |
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