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This Morning's Pleasure
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This Morning's Pleasure |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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This Morning's pleasure This morning’s pleasure was to be A robin perched in dogwood tree And cheeping loudly in request I back away from near her nest I took another distant pose Away from nest in arbored rose Unpondered thoughts soon came to me Of what would be her ecstasy What makes her heart in pleasure sing New fallen rain, an early spring A breeze across a wing aslide The freedom of a feather’s glide Discovery of some clay to mold A source of straw to firmly hold A nest to place life’s offering Survival of all three this spring Arising with the flock in fall As hundreds gather to the call And flutter forth with ruffling sounds To find their winter’s feeding grounds Or could a robin’s ecstasy Be perching in a dogwood tree Just swinging there in simple bliss On breezy sunny days like this Elizabeth Santos |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The magical and blessful life of Liz. I love the way you share your visions with us. They are so clear and so vivid that they are so easy for us to see. Beautiful penning from you as always my friend. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is so natural and beautiful, Elizabeth! I love nature, and this one put me right in the middle of a peaceful morning garden. Great job of writing, my friend... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Amazing writing...beautiful and whimsical  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"A breeze across a wing aslide The freedom of a feather’s glide" Oh Liz ... I just love how your thoughts flow! What a beautiful read this was ... surmising nature's thoughts, as I so often try to do myself as I watch from a distance. I absolutely loved this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Elizabeth this is just beautiful! I love this sort of poetry. Deb |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
you took me back with this - to my week in Virginia on the shore of the Chesapeake- and an early morning study of Cardinals as I sat in solitude at dawn while everyone else slept - thank you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wistfully wonderful, Lady Elizabeth... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Soooo beautiful, Elizabeth! Having seen the tree and the rose arbor personally, this one is very special to me! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Took me there in a heartbeat ! 'Just swinging there in simple bliss' Smiling~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, We will never know what robins think There has never been a robin shrink. Love Sy |
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