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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-09-29 08:54 AM

I will lay with you
in forests moist;
in meadows full of vibrant gold.

I will lay with you
in colored leaves;
in blowing winds of winter cold.

I will lay with you
in misty rain;
in memories that won't let go.

I will lay with you
in early dawn;
in midnight musings moonlight glow.

I will lay with you
on sands of time;
on beaches built of stories told.

I will lay with you
in sweet reprieve;
in love returned to always hold...

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-09-29 08:55 AM

Who in his right mind could refuse that. Wow.....this one really reaches up and grabs you. I wanted to find a favorite line but Well....I love them all.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2000-09-29 09:48 AM

Good morning Sandra...
Oh....my friend.....this is beautiful!
It's good to see the joy and desire flowing
from your pen......I love the way you write
with such a smooth touch.
don't ever stop.....

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

Waverly917
Member

since 2000-09-23

Posts 90
Hugo, MN

3 posted 2000-09-29 01:23 PM

I love this poem! It has such a sweetness and innocence to it, its beautiful.

Abra

"So often times it happens that we live
our lives in chains
And we never even know we have the key."
-Already Gone, The Eagles

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

4 posted 2000-09-29 01:27 PM

catalinamoon,

I loove this poem.. so sweet and so love filled

I'm sooo glad I stopped in

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2000-09-29 02:09 PM

Now this is beautiful poetry of the soul

No man in his right mind would ever refuse such a poetess. Excellent flow and imagery

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

jinxed
Member

since 2000-09-27

Posts 86

6 posted 2000-09-29 02:44 PM

this is a keeper.....i really love this

great poem

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2000-09-29 02:52 PM

Sweet thoughts...James

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2000-09-29 04:55 PM

Hi all, thanks for reading this, can you tell I'm in love

Sandra

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2000-09-29 04:57 PM

Cat, what a lovely way to start Fall..being in love, and letting the whole world know...

Brava!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

10 posted 2000-09-29 05:36 PM

Cat,
I couldn't tell you were in love I thought you were naturally this good.

Loved this poem.
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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