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Open Poetry #10

You made me

sosweet82
Junior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 17
Phoenix, AZ

0 posted 2000-09-29 04:18 AM

You made me smile,
When you laghted out loud
You made me smile,
In my eyes you could dance on the clouds
You made me smile,
When you kissed me good night
You made me smile,
When you held me tight

You mad me cry,
When you walked away
You made me cry,
When you broke my heart that day
You made me cry,
When you left me
You made me cry,
When "we" no longer could be

Now I smile when I think of how I cried,
Now I no longer cry when I think of how you lied.
I made me who I am,
And that took the help of no man.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-09-29 04:24 AM

Well, actually, I think you had a little bit of help in the beginning (wink) but you seem to be doing just fine now...nice show of strength here!

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2000-09-29 08:17 AM

Now this shows alot of strength and solid dedication in your abilities to overcome. Nice write.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

3 posted 2000-09-29 09:51 AM

Only after we are stronger can we be thankful for those hard times and tears!

I agree with both Serenity and Mark!
Nice show of strength to overcome!

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