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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-09-28 10:25 PM



                               In sapphire mist of the morning

                                   come bathe with me my love

                                 secluded by majestic mountains

                                     and pillows.. amber gold

                                     while eyelash of the sun

                                  gently brushes against our skin

                                  and whisper of morning song

                                    serenades the earth within

                                   scent of gardenia dew drops

                                    ravishes loves sweet flower

                                     inviting your tender kiss

                                    in the final morning hour

                                    curtain of sheer sapphire

                                    unfolds its loving warmth

                                       naked in your arms

                                     your love, an umbrella

                                      in sapphire lovers mist




Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul.
Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal.

© Copyright 2000 Victoria - All Rights Reserved
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
1 posted 2000-09-28 10:37 PM


This is quite well written Victoria
enjoyed very much

Victoria
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2 posted 2000-09-28 10:41 PM


Thank you Rex..taking a relaxing break from unpacking boxes haa..
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-09-28 11:10 PM


Victoria, you write of such beautiful moments in time. I think this is perfect.
Sandra

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Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2000-09-29 03:29 AM


Victoria~
I was captured in the vision
of the beauty of this phrase -

'while eyelash of the sun
gently brushes against our skin'


A stunning unique thought ...
~*Marge*~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Victoria
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5 posted 2000-09-29 09:15 AM


Thank you Catalinamoon and Marge..So happy you enjoyed..appreciate both of you peeking in..
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