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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2000-09-28 07:57 PM


With Globberman and Guulekslick
I crave the fontanblue
For in the durshall mytermine
I see a bit of you

In openness I fondulack
With peace and poetry
So bring your wistenalia
To set my spirit free

If all this cammospiel is new
To ears of the woolery
Remember sometimes it’s fun
To write in ‘tomfoolery’



[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 09-28-2000).]

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Andrew Scott
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1 posted 2000-09-28 08:05 PM


Doc. Suess would be prodiferously proud!
Sven
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2 posted 2000-09-28 08:30 PM


Woo Hoo!!

I love really this
it my mind make laugh
timessome it is to this read
from you cool very!!

Great!!

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Rex Allen McCoy
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3 posted 2000-09-28 08:35 PM


I couldn't resist the title ... I was going to look some of these words up in the dictionary until I read the ending
LOL

WhtDove
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4 posted 2000-09-28 09:18 PM


Sounds like a German version of Dr. Suess. LOL I too was sittin here thinking, Sharon this is the first one you wrote that I don't understand! LOL

I love it! Great ending!  

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I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

Denise
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5 posted 2000-09-28 10:42 PM


LOL Now here is an attention grabbing title!!   Thanks for the levity, Sharon!!

Denise

Poet deVine
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6 posted 2000-09-28 11:36 PM


Do you think a title is important? Yes!
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7 posted 2000-09-28 11:58 PM


DeVine one, I am gerstocknit at the depth of your brestivery!!
Poet deVine
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8 posted 2000-09-29 12:37 PM




Just trying for a little verlysmacking in this hossenstabler....

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9 posted 2000-09-29 12:46 PM


Loved this Sharon!  What a splendiferous creation ... you weave imaginantisy beautifully! Now help, cause my dictionary's broken!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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10 posted 2000-09-29 06:15 PM


This reminds me of Jabberwocky. But I like it much better.
Dr.Moose1
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11 posted 2000-09-29 09:11 PM


PDV,
This one needs no doctor , just thought I'd make a house call , My-t fine reading here .Oops I'm being paged , gotta go !

Wilfred Yeats
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12 posted 2000-09-29 11:09 PM


quite so muchlick of of the flabberjab
I found upheavealed mein heeartenstroke
did laughenjibe all over desen shirtentees

(translation: I loved it)


[This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 09-29-2000).]

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13 posted 2000-09-29 11:51 PM


supercalifragilisticexpialidocious...


Karilea
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14 posted 2000-09-30 12:02 PM


ehehe way kewl sharon!
Kethry
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15 posted 2000-09-30 07:37 AM


Ok Sharon, you're ready to go hunting the Snark.
Loved this poem.
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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