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It should be me
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It should be me |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA 
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It should be me Alarm clock rings, ending dreams A new day has begun What it brings, not what it seems ‘cause she’s still the one You’ve been her man right from the start She still has your name She’s got your hand; I have your heart but it’s not the same In other’s eyes, she’s the prize I’m the one who’s wrong They can’t see our destiny Together, we belong With life she glows, though no one knows the hurt that they can’t see She grows with pride, I cry inside Baby, it should be me |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tara~this is painful and so sad....-SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
You'll have it all soon my friend. . . these things take time. . . From the heart. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
SEA, you have no idea. At least, I hope you don't. It hurts too much. Sven, thank you, my friend. Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tara, slow and steady wins the race, it doesn't help I know but it gives you something to hold onto when there nowhere else to go when you heart is healing, from the hurt and pain it isn't seen as a balm, the sunshine after rain but take it from me my friend, things work out for the best and if it should have been you, then put it to the test but while you're busy sorting, keep writing it all out we're always here to listen, that's what passions is about. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Tara, It is you in my heart; I know that doesn't make the present any easier to deal with, but you have to know that you are my future. I can only pray that after this is said and done that I have the rest of my life to prove that to you. Personal comments aside, you have written a very beautiful poem that shows so well the sadness and hurt that you are dealing with. Hold on, my muse; I love you. Fellow readers, My apologies for making a personal statement to Tara in this forum but a poem from the heart deserves a reply from the heart. If any of you out there are in love, no matter what the circumstances, HOLD ON to it with all that you have, because it's the single best feeling in the world to know that you have found the one person who is right for you. Don't give up. - Jeff Osborne |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Kethry, thank you for the poetic reply. Keep writing it all out...great advice. Jeff, nobody ever said it'd be easy, huh? Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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