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inot2B
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0 posted 2000-09-28 12:54 PM



I share my computer with husband and son
Laughter rings through the house as they have fun
Over and over they read each other’s poetry
Valid criticism is received without any animosity
Each day my son visits and gets on line to read the words
That’s here on Passionate Forum, where no poem is seen as absurd
Here I’ve watched them grow closer day by day
Each has gained insight into the others way
My only problem now is, I don’t get enough time on line


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-09-28 01:30 PM


Ditto...well done! Now, acrostic on!

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


inot2B
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2 posted 2000-09-28 04:57 PM


Sunshine, It is finally my turn, thanks for reading.
jlocke
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3 posted 2000-09-28 05:38 PM


I like it...Mom.
btw get another computer.

Love is the law, love under will.



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4 posted 2000-09-28 09:03 PM


LOL



Excellent. . .I know the feeling. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
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