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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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Seven notes sharp flat that's that all there is to music really as a whole half qaurter note however you slice it the notes are all the same you may search for the undiscovered key but all new songs use the same notes as the ones we played yesterday there is nothing new under the sun was written oh -- say three thousand five hundred years ago or so and since then with the same stuff that was just laying around we put together cars airplanes toasters and the internet yep same stuff just different packages and the bottom line: we still just want to curl up with someone at the end of the day |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Rock On! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
toooooooo incredibly eerie ... *shaking head*... seriously... believe me when i tell you this... i woke up this morning and had all kinds of ideas in my head... my muse was on a rampage... i quickly grabbed a pen and wrote a few of them down... the ones i could remember... one of them was this: "Ecclesiastes" ok, so that was a poem i planned on writing today. this is too strange.... haven't talked to anybody about this... it's a note i wrote to myself and stuck in my pocket hmmmmmmmm...... the only other thing i can say is this poem is awesome... and... i wouldn't change a line or word in it... LOL...  you da hawke! and your words fly straight up, straight out, and right into the world with truth ... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's all in the way The notes are put together That gives unholy screeching Or a sultry "Stormy Weather." The same words are available For anyone to use The result - trash or treasure Depends upon a muse (Who may be on vacation) So all these building blocks May be scattered without reason Or aligned so that it rocks! This does, nephew... and as for the last verse... AMEN! *G* |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
thanks Auntie -- HuggsZzz!! Well -- maybe something you wrote somewhere else inspired it??? ya reckon??? turn, turn, turn.... Sunshine -- a better compliment there is none... thank you |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
a most excellent verse with a strange -but true- theme. does that mean we're all just pieced together monkeys, whose brains just got a little bigger? i wonder why we lost the tails... great poem and most inspiring-as well as intriguing. "When you feel like you've had it up to here 'cause you mad enough to scream but you sad enough to tear... that's Rock Bottom." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"We still just want to curl up with someone at the end of the day." Yes and that would be Mina. I had a fabulous time reading this poem...James |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
... but what I would not give to have all my notes in tune, plucked just so to provide an endless melody that sounds so sweet. You present a wonderful truth... I bow to you and yours. Peace! [This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 09-28-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rebel--amazing isn't it...and the last lines are the perfect ending. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Funny how those same notes can produce the greatest music ever heard or just a lot of noise...it's all in the hands of the player. Yours are very capable, Hawkster.. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Deer, Martie, Andrew, James, Ethan... Thanks muchly |
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