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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-09-28 10:56 AM


Only In My Eyes

It is simply
my view
my humble
opinion of
love between
two

only in my eyes
should there
be a spark
for thee

I should light
up bright
knowing
you’re the
one

only my eyes
should behold
you and
only you

they should
dance at all
romance even
if it’s a
walk in your
arms

or a
dance
across
rugs

and within
these eyes
realize
all things
come true

even if
it is
only in my eyes




Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


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1 posted 2000-09-28 10:59 AM


Ohhh yes Karilea!!!!!!  Bonnie
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2 posted 2000-09-28 11:04 AM


Karilea,

This was beautiful hon! And YES only in the eyes does it matter. The eyes say everything, including the truth. Wonderful expressions you've penned here  
Take care.
Amy  

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

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3 posted 2000-09-28 11:59 AM


Enjoyed it a lot!!!!!!!
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4 posted 2000-09-28 12:15 PM


the eyes hold the secrets of the heart my friend. . . always. . .

just wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-09-28 01:37 PM


Thank you, my friends...

Bonnie, your "yes" sings...

Amy, thank you...

Verdana, so glad...

Sven, all eyes should gleam so...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


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