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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Lay Me Down ~*Marge Tindal*~ Lay me down one more time in fields of passion and desire Stir me with the heat of you Come on baby, light my fire ! Whisper to me of fantasy on satin sheets of ivory-tinge Hold me in the reality of knowing the fire of passion's singe Fan the flames to raging from the glowing red hot embers When the fire burns out of control Quench me with remember In the ecstasy of the moment call out my name in desire Flames will light up the night as you take me higher - higher - higher Passion spent with pleasure let me fall gently beside you Wrap your arms around me close Oh, babe ... the passion that you do ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
At my age I'm not sure I'm up to the challenge How about if I just warm your cold feet?  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rex~ Oh, sure ... with winter coming on - you'll come in real handy ! at your age LOL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge---There you go with the satin sheets again..didn't I tell you, cotton? Seriously though, when you write this way, cotton might burn. This is beautiful and it sizzles. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, wow this is real passion, I love it. This fairly sets the page aflame, you are such a great writer. This is awesome, I'm speachless. Marsha |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wow...quench me with remember...gotta love that...another beauty here Marge! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ you are on FIRE!!  Loved this. ( this was last night for me) -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and if that doesn't work, I know where flannel sheets are sold...LOL! Now, I'll have THAT song in my head ALL day! |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ok Marge....I am going to read this to my hubby, then I am going to get rid of the comforter and the flannel sheets..... Gotta run now though, need to get some of those satin sheets....but first tell me, how slippery are they, I mean do I need velcro or something to keep me from falling outta the bed??? Wanna buy it all at once.... Bonnie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Got a little singed reading this. Hot stuff. *L* Sy |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, Oh my goodness feeling hot  and seeing red, weres the bucket  of water. Have this feeling passions are going to be a blaze to day! AWESOME READ HERE. Love, Cerenity |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Sorry for got to save this for that special day!!! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 well woohooooooo!!! another fire for my day, thanks Marge for the added grin(smile) GE |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey Marge! Last time I laid you down There were fire ants on the ground! We didn't see them in the grass Till they crawled up and bit your....leg  We both jumped up and screamed in pain.. The neighbors thought we were insane! They thought, because the moon was full, It was a pagan ritual And called the cops who handcuffed us.. (I'm still amazed how you can cuss) Then hauled us, naked, off to jail Cost me a grand to post the bail Now you say lay me down again?? I think I'd rather just be friends!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ I think this sounds like the perfect evening!!! Very hot and steamy here on this cold night. Thanks my friend!!  You have written with such emotion and intensity. Love it!!Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I have an extra keyboard if yours melted there Marge |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oh my, where's that volunteer fire department when I need 'em! You gotta love a passion-filled piece of poetry! Great work, Marge! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
 OKAY........WHO IS PLAYIN WITH FIRE IN HERE???????/ Don't you know the dangers you could could cause? Now let me tell you something my friend....fires blazing out of control can really get you into trouble if you are NOT CAREFUL......  Hugs my friend, I think you might look into asbestos lined sheets instead. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Because I can!!!!!!!! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Whew! Now Marge this is hot, I'm glad I came back to read this poem. You go girl! LMAO@MarkTake care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Tee-Hee ! Marsha~ Thank you, gal ! Serenity~ I appreciate you - ya' know ? SEA~ Alright ! ! Karilea~ Keep singing ! Bonnie~ Part of the fun of satin is holding on tight ! Seymour~ Good for you ! ! Cerenity~ Yeah - I smell a little smoke myself ! GreenEyes~ Glad you liked the sparks ! Balladeer~ Where's your adventuresome side ? A GOOD Balladeer would have exterminated the fire ants ! LoneWolf~ Glad to steam up your windows ! Paula~ LOL ! It's smoking ! TennesseeAngel~ Firemen are always in heat ! MarkB~ Baby, my as is bestos ! LOL ! Melissa~ Mark IS the comedian, huh ? *Thanks for the wonderful responses to this little piece ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Love this, Marge, wow! Kathleen |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
LOved the poem, and loved reading the comments Mark, you are TOO MUCH!! Margie, just a normal morning for you, you passionate thing you Liz |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sweet! |
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