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Ganymede
New Member

since 2000-09-27

Posts 3

0 posted 2000-09-27 05:45 PM

Truely my heart is fallen
for a soul I belive my own
but that soul has given kisses
to my lips made of stone.

Of this world I have travled
and set by my own accord
my transparent skin gives meaning
to show my hearts gallore.

That this soul has opend me
and given love to be free
then fallen away to look at others
keeping me firmly as a second.

What chance do I have but to try
and pray this heart be kind
to love me without reservation
or leave me to my life.

[This message has been edited by Ganymede (edited 09-27-2000).]

Waverly917
Member

since 2000-09-23

Posts 90
Hugo, MN

1 posted 2000-09-27 07:20 PM

Welcome to PASSIONS. I hope that "this heart" is kind to you. Great poem.

Abra

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-09-27 07:27 PM

Welcome to Passions. By the way, check your e mail.

Kathleen

BirdeeB
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 106
USA

3 posted 2000-09-27 09:36 PM

Wow, so many things come to mind when i read your peom, thats was great!!
BirdeeB

"So don't judge me by my failures, only by my dreams" SR71

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-09-27 09:46 PM

Ganymede~
Welcome to this great big wonderful world of Passions In Poetry ...
Nice entrance ... hope you'll enjoy reading the works of others and share more with us.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2000-09-27 09:53 PM

Welcome to Passions Ganymede! What a wonderful first post ... I hope this heart you speak of will be kind, I look forward to reading more!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

6 posted 2000-09-27 11:32 PM

Our hearts own confusion, wow this was a good poem, welcome ,sometimes our hearts let loose and really throw us in a loop hole.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2000-09-28 03:02 AM

Ganymede,
welcome to passions, I enjoyed your first post, I hope there are many more.
Kethry

Martinque
Member

since 2000-05-17

Posts 69

8 posted 2000-09-28 11:47 AM

Very nice first post. I look forward to reading more. You are talented indeed.

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

9 posted 2000-09-28 02:36 PM

Welcome to Passions!!!!

Judging from your first post, I can see you are going to make an excellent addition to our family here.

A very intrigueing and powerful poem. I can't wait to read more from you.

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

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