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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-09-27 04:20 PM



~Darling Once More~


The music stops
the dance is over
the flowers on the floor

It's a long walk to the door
in slow motion, I go
longing to run...oh how I wish to fly
this dance is unrehearsed

Looking back, I remember you
my heart remembers to break
this dream is hard to take

Far away, a space between us now
never to join again, the circle broken
in bittersweet dreams...
I'll think of you


BloomingRose


© Copyright 2000 DebraS. - All Rights Reserved
Jon Mewett
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1 posted 2000-09-27 04:28 PM


Longing and lamenting...........but kinda nice..........and soft.

Jon

Wesley the Blue
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2 posted 2000-09-27 04:29 PM


Very touching, and sad.  Somewhere out there is that etearnal dance partner, you just gotta keep looking.  Nice work.

Keith

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-09-27 04:40 PM


Deb-You have no idea how this one fits for me....or maybe you do after reading all that is going on.  This is a lovely piece of poetry but the words say so much to me right now.  I am putting this in my library so I can secretly call it mine for a certain butterfly and I.  Thank you so much for all you do.
Sven
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4 posted 2000-09-27 06:00 PM


If only my heart could stop hearing the music. . .

Just beautiful Blooming Rose. . . well done. . .

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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-09-28 12:22 PM


Just me being selfish and wanting this one to be read more.
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6 posted 2000-09-28 12:28 PM


BloomingRose~
This glides across the page with beautiful thoughts.
Enjoyed it very much.
~*Marge*~


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tracie66
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7 posted 2000-09-28 02:32 AM


Bloomingrose~
Wonderful piece of work, very enjoyable to read...well done
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe


BloomingRose
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8 posted 2000-09-28 09:03 AM




Thank you all for kind words. The dance was unrehearsed, as broken hearts often are. Still, we can all learn a new dance.

I for one, have new tap in my toes.

Deb

snowpants
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9 posted 2000-09-28 10:39 PM


No, I, for one, will never be ready or rehearsed for a broken heart.
Beautiful and very touching write!!  Enjoyed it a lot!

sp  

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