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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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YES the sun (yes) on the rise YES you are my own surprise.... Yes, you are, you're sweet, (sublime) another day, another rhyme... And YES... I'll risk it, once again, as yes, my heart, whispers again... to count you as my only friend... I whisper, "Yes,"-- begin again... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
No I say kicking and screaming NO NO NO!!!! No I say...please go away please go but don't look back because my friend I am whispering yes yes yes ****editors note**** to all who read,....DO NOT READ INTO THIS WHAT IS NOT THERE....just read and enjoy two friends frolicking |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*winks* |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I thought the poem was a very nice way to say how glad you were to wake up and be given a chance to write more rhymes. Then I read Marks remarks and now I'm confused. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oohhhh here we go again *smile* well look whos up and playing in the sunshine my my my ... Lil sen ....looking so fine  ya know I LOVE this one right?? YEA you know me thinks me twin will be wearing her sunglasses at night  later me-get-a-tan-gator (no tan lines tho) *winkie winkie* hehehe me |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
[under my breath]...DAMN that shampoo anyway as we continue to frolic in the sun |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and Jan, you're my favorite witch, with a capitol "B"!!! LOVING YOU OVER HERE....not much fun, when the warden is at play? *double winks* |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ MAYBE ....  I wanna frolic with you and MarkB~ and JanetMarie~ .... Y'all come whisk me away !!!! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
g'mornin' "mom"--hee hee..... and inot2B--confusion is the only the beginning of understanding..... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Did Sen say, "Yes!" How could she know, What I was thinking awhile ago? But, alack, alas, I can see Her sweet "Yes"'s Weren't meant for me. But... "I'll have what she's having." lol |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
LJ---I am not quite sure of your personal habits, but... methinks you'd not want any part of "what it is", I am having...*triple winks* oh...and brb...LOL |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Serenity,...YES, this is so pleasing in it's reading. I love the word Sublime and each and every line in this is so special and I absolutely adore it and you. Take care S Gurl. *Peace. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sublime rhymes, time to play, a friend nearby, a sunny day, reasons enough for me to say yes I like this. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh...and another thing...lol...we only come to conclusions when we tire of thinking... QUADRUPLE *Winks* |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
yes the sun, no not the dragons eyes. i love your words every day, thank you serenity, Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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