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seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
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0 posted 2000-09-27 07:24 AM


Into The Mist

Into the mist...
of what is yet to be,
future unfolded
still flying free
like a falcon,
soariing,
unfettered
by lies
still pure
and unwritten
against opal skies.

Into the mist....
ride delicate dreams,
tender planning,
of intimate schemes.
the joining of spirit,
mind, body,
and soul.
the completion
a union
the ultimate goal.

Into the mist...


© Copyright 2000 Sandra McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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Member Seraphic
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1 posted 2000-09-27 07:26 AM


... Glad I was here to read this one this morning - or I might have mist it.... It's lovely
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-09-27 09:56 AM


Call Hallmark----this one belongs on a card.  Lovely verse from you.  Serious about the Hallmark comment....but actually I like "Blue Mountain" better.
CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
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3 posted 2000-11-05 02:16 AM


Seraphin you've penned a splendid write and me believes this poem deserves to be bumped up...

I enjoyed this read thank you
Coco

Ethan Halo
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on the roof again
4 posted 2000-11-05 02:39 AM


a great read.
i just got home, and it is having a calming effect on me. i thought of "the never-ending story" as i read the first stanza and i don't know why...

I was thinking of the immortal words of Socrates who said,"I drank what?"

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
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Michigan
5 posted 2000-11-05 11:02 AM


Well, thank you all. I've been away, and this was so nice to come back to! A bump in the dark!! Sandi
vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...
6 posted 2000-11-09 04:36 PM



seraphin-
   WOW...this is awesome.  
   such beauty in these words
   you've so wonderfully penned.  
   i love it much.  

   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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7 posted 2000-11-09 04:42 PM


A very lovely poem.
Deb  

seraphin
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8 posted 2000-11-09 10:30 PM


Vicky and Deb, my thanks.  
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