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Kevin
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Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 2000-09-27 01:11 AM


Pathetic at best
is all I can feel
with all Ive confessed
I doubt that I'll heal
I told you I loved you
I still feel the same
you said you never knew
such lies are for shame
I gave you my heart
and you took it in stride
felt wrong from the start
when you let me inside
and when it was done
I was left so confused
the dream had been fun
but my mind was abused
what did you expect?
you said as I stared
how could you neglect
the way that I cared
and why is it me
who cant sleep at night
crying constantly
it dosent seem right
I wish that I knew
why I cant pass the day
without thinking of you
and what I would say
to hold you once more
and know that your mine
even when I'm sure
you'd just hurt me in time

© Copyright 2000 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
1 posted 2000-09-27 01:20 AM


Kevin,
so good to read your work again. i see you haven't skipped a beat...still turning out some awesome work. this one got me big time. a lot of feeling in depth in this poem. i am sorry that you are hurting. i hope you find comfort and start to heal. god bless.
take care.
amy  


"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
2 posted 2000-09-27 01:33 AM


kevin..this is so sweet, and sounds like you have such a gentle heart...i'm sorry youre hurting..love does hurt sometimes doesnt it...    

heres hoping you heal real soon    

hugs, dg


theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper

Waverly917
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since 2000-09-23
Posts 90
Hugo, MN
3 posted 2000-09-28 08:42 PM


I wish that I knew
why I cant pass the day
without thinking of you
and what I would say
to hold you once more
and know that your mine
even when I'm sure
you'd just hurt me in time

That is just the way love is sometimes.  It doesn't matter if they can be hurtful sometimes, that doesn't stop the feelings.   Hope you are able to reclain your heart soon.

Abra

"So often times it happens that we live
our lives in chains
And we never even know we have the key."
-Already Gone, The Eagles

Marina
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
4 posted 2000-09-28 10:21 PM


Kevin, I almost missed this one my friend. I am so glad I found it.  Once agian, as always, your heart is on your sleeve.  I wish you much happiness in the future.  You are a very special person Kevin, perhaps you deserve better.........

Hugs,
Marina  


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
5 posted 2000-09-28 10:24 PM


Hi Kevin this is great work here, so easily could hear your heart beat to each line, that's what really makes a poem.
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