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Of Love ... (wedding bells are calling)
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Of Love ... (wedding bells are calling) |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Of Love The kiss is sweet Our bodies meet We feel the touch Of Love In our Journey On roads smooth and rocky We learn our strength Of Love To the future We promise forever To give our Vows Of Love Down the Isle The Wedding recital We accept the Bonds Of Love The gold we carry To honour and cherish Is our Pledge Of Love When we throw away Those vows we say We release the Rings Of Love  James Parker Haley (c) Well this is a repost cause...I'm off to a wedding on the coast, hope it turns out better then the above. See you all on Oct 2.  I just love women in white.  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Beautiful poem James. I am sure they will have much luck in the future. Have a great time........ Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Good poem .... and have a good time! K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nicely written..however it doesnt turn out real well...  enjoy your woman in white--dont stand too close, you might stay away... haha! hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
lovely poem, Park! Corinne |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Hi Parker, my extreamly talented friend Dee said your writing was worth a visit, and has she got good taste? If she hasn't then I'm a sweet young thing who's never been kissed? Great poem, enjoy the wedding, actually I always think the guests have a far better time than the bride and groom. I liked this a lot. take care Marsha  [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 09-28-2000).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Parker~ Have a good time and remember, the woman in white~ is taken! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Parker you devil. hehee. (to the little insert). However, this poem is beautiful and sad at the same time. Releasing the rings,...you've written well P,...you've written well. Take care of you now. *Peace. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And now the master poet types in the purity of white. Been studying have you my friend. I have a feeling that there will be no stopping you now. Excellent write as usual and as long as you keep your hands off the bride and don't sweep her off her feet with your poetry then I have no doubt that they will be happy for a long long time to come. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, yes I think so they seem very much in love.... Severn, thank you I will and did. dg, ah she's much too tall for me... Corinne, thank you sweet poet. Marsha, hmmmmm tell me more. SEA, yes I know.... thanks. Spitfire, yes the devil side of me always gets me in trouble... Mark, well I think the brides fairly safe from me being my first cousin and all... And the white I thought should go with a poem about love, maybe I should have written one with a nice happy ending..... as for the studying...well I've had my hand help in the creation of a rainbow or two... Parker |
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