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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-09-26 04:56 PM


When I Fall In Love


Autumns in the air, toss a rose
run for a leaf covered hill
roll in the leaves, wrapped in safe arms
laugh till we cry, end it with sighs...

Winter snow brings snowball fights
hot apple cider, a kiss on a moonlit night
golden flames crackle before a fireplace
snug in your arms, no need for words
music fills the room, warm kisses we share

When I fall in love
it will be forever...

dreams fulfilled
memories we share
to this day still

~BloomingRose~



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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-09-26 05:28 PM


quote:
When I fall in love
it will be forever...


Me, too.

Elizabeth



Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near...
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Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-09-26 06:44 PM


*Sigh*
you paint some lovely, romantic images here Rose...
very tender and sincere sentiments...
written like a whisper
very nice indeed ...
take care
jm

Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2000-09-26 06:46 PM


Such lovely images you paint and the love you penned fills the forum with it's sincerity and truth.  Came back to leave a little something for you and your sweetie!!!



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Sven
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4 posted 2000-09-26 06:46 PM


"Or I'll never fall in love again. . .

In a restless world like this is
Love is ended before it's begun
And too many moonlight kisses
Seem to cool in the warmth of the sun. . . "

One of my favorite songs. . . *sigh*

And now, one of my favorite poems. . . wonderful my friend. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


BloomingRose
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5 posted 2000-09-26 07:17 PM


Elizabeth, Hold on to the dream.

JM, Romance is indeed the spice of life.

Mark, Thanks my friend...  

Sven, Romance and dreams, I think it's somehow the same thing. I am a hopeless romantic.  
Whats the old saying... better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all.

X Angel
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6 posted 2000-09-26 07:43 PM


hope springs eternal

great poem  
~Heather

Wilfred Yeats
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7 posted 2000-09-26 11:46 PM


Like Sven -
You brought to my mind that great lyric:
"When I give my heart
It will be completly
Or I'll never give my heart
In a restless world like this is
Love is ended before its begun
And too many moonlight kisses
Seem to cool in the warmth of the sun"

I hope you find the love that never cools
~S~


~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning.

~ Billy Wilder

BloomingRose
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8 posted 2000-09-27 08:56 AM




Heather, Glad you enjoyed.

Wilfred, Often love is ended before it's begun, but love is worth the chance if two can share. Thanks for reading.

dgvarner
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9 posted 2000-09-27 10:00 AM


love will be yours B ROSE    one day you will find your forever...

nice writing!

hugs, dg


theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper

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