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Martini
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-09-26 01:40 PM


The revelation came late last night,
that sometimes it hurts too much to care
and everything must eventually end
and life is not always fair.

I put so much time
so much of myself into,
the hopes and dreams
of a tomorrow with you.

Everyday has been the same
not knowing if progress I had made
I held on to the hope,
and now in a sealed box it has been laid.

You own a part of my soul
it will be yours forever
but now the time has come
to accept that when us will be again is never.

Goodbye, my love
great times we have shared
but now it is over.


[This message has been edited by Martini (edited 09-26-2000).]

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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-09-26 02:06 PM



Oh, Martini...
              The realization of a relationship is sometimes the hardest part. Once you accept it, then you can move on. But that doesn't help with the hurt inside.
    this is a heartfelt poem, and sharing
    it will be the start of healing....
    (along with the hugs coming your way!)


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-09-26 02:36 PM


Never easy to let it go and seems to always leave a scar on the heart.  Wonderful penning from you and so glad to see your name among us again in the open forums

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-26-2000).]

Parker
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129
ON
3 posted 2000-09-26 02:45 PM


Martini, glad to see your pen again also.
A very abrupt piece about the reality that I for one don't like to realize.


Parker

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-09-26 02:51 PM


A sad day when we realize we must let go and start over again...James
Martini
Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-09-26 07:50 PM


Sunny
thanks so much
and the hugs are most definately always appreciated...
it's been hard, but it's good to begin to heal

Mark
I am so glad to be back, for a hwile I felt like I had nothing to add so I didn't, and then a new light was shone my way.

Parker
Thanks so much
Reality sometimes sucks, but it's good to know that there are people out there who are willing to help.

James
It is a sad day, however at the same time it's really nice to feel like you cn live again.

thank you all for your replys

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

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