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Lover's Bliss (part 2 of 3)
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Lover's Bliss (part 2 of 3) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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As we stand here in the darkness I feel you trembling with desire And those three words you said to me Raise passion ever higher Nothing sounds as sweet As my name upon your lips As you explore in gentle wonder With searching fingertips A lover's game of hide and seek Where you and I both win The entensity ever higher soars As I touch your heated skin The wanting grows between us With every breath we take And the need just gets stronger With every promise that we make TO BE CONTINUED......... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Now I must find part one. This is tease, cutting us off like this. How long til part three? A lovely poem, incidentally Liz |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
What a treasure hunt I had. You struck gold with this. Part 3 soon please? Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
*whistles* well well well mr jeffrey what a little gem we have here. where is part three?? can't wait to read!! take care. amy  "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I am waiting with bated breath for part three...cmon cmon GIVE... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
HEY YOU...do ya gotta permit to BURN in the forums... YEEEE HA...dang boy.. this is a tastee tease.. bring it on baby ...YOU KNOW we WANT it and YOU KNOW you WANT too  LOLVERY sensual and very nice...VERY just read part one and then slid on over here LOL   (hehe)"Nothing sounds as sweet As my name upon your lips As you explore in gentle wonder With searching fingertips" love that verse..very cool while very hot later-incinerator-gator LOL jm |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Ok....so I WON'T go to bed just yet!!!! I'm waiting....hehehe |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, You take off a while and come back and leave us hanging???? You are such a tease!!!!! That is not very nice!!!! Great writing my friend. Waiting part three . . . hmmm, hmmm, hmmmmmm . . . Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Snowdwen Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 75Louisiana |
Wow Part ones was good and the secound even better I'm looking forwared to the third! Michell "You live you learn and life moves on" |
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