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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-09-26 04:24 AM



Poetic Sup
~*Marge Tindal*~

The sun goes down
The moon comes up
I drink my fill
from poetic cup

A laugh ~ a smile
a tear ~ a sigh
One more heart-felt lullabye

On star wished in deepest sigh
beckoning love to come
Folding dreams in satin pillows
until the morning dawns

The moon goes down
The sun comes up
Sweetened is my morning cup
overflowing with poetic sup



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Jon Mewett
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1 posted 2000-09-26 04:28 AM


Moon lights muse so wonderfully identified.


nice Marge

jon

vlraynes
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2 posted 2000-09-26 05:30 AM



Good morning, Marge-
   love this.     a wonderful start to my
   very early morning.  

   love,
      -vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Marsha
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3 posted 2000-09-26 05:46 AM


Marge this is great, your poems are always so well written and so beatifully presented.
I love this.

Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2000-09-26 06:05 AM


What a sweet brew
Can I have a cup?
Liz

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-09-26 08:11 PM


JonM~
Thank you, sweets.
Glad you enjoyed it.

Vicky~
Glad to share a morning sup with a friend.

Marsha~
Thank you.  That's a heck of a nice thing to say.

Elizabeth, my friend~
Anytime it's brewed ... you are just the right sweetner !
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Sunshine
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6 posted 2000-09-26 10:31 PM




See you on the 'morrow, my friend...
{~,^}


Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Wilfred Yeats
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7 posted 2000-09-26 11:11 PM


"The moon goes down
The sun comes up
Sweetened is my morning cup
overflowing with poetic sup"

The sun goes down
The moon rises up
None sweeter are the words I read
Than those from Marge when her pen bleeds




~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning.

~ Billy Wilder

tracie66
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8 posted 2000-09-27 03:00 AM


Oh Marge this is so beautiful, what more can I say except "you rock girl"  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Kethry
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9 posted 2000-09-27 05:51 AM


Marge,
I could drink this to the dregs even without the sweetener yours words bring.
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2000-09-27 11:29 PM


Karilea~


Wilfred~
Thanks for the poetic reply of rhyme !

Tracie~
All this rocking is addictive !  
Love you.

Kethry~
Bottoms up ! ... thanks my friend.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Mark Bohannan
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11 posted 2000-09-27 11:33 PM


Marge, my friend, I have read this at least ten times today and have been trying so hard to come up with a poetic reply for you but I don't know where the hell my muse went. Have you seen her.  I say her because a cowboy has to have a female muse don't he?  Please forgive my not being able to come up with one but know that I loved it all the same.  You spill words so easily and I wish I had that back.
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12 posted 2000-09-28 04:07 AM


This was beautiful. Sounds like the daily life of a poet if ya ask me.  


My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber.

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13 posted 2000-09-28 04:07 AM


This was beautiful. Sounds like the daily life of a poet if ya ask me.  


My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber.

Denise
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14 posted 2000-09-28 10:10 PM


Beautiful, Marge!! The world would be pretty dreary without it!!

Denise

Rosebud1229
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15 posted 2000-09-28 10:54 PM


No wonder I'm putting on the weight all this poetic sup! This was quite clever Marge,
Lone Wolf
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16 posted 2000-09-28 11:51 PM


Marge~

Wonderful as always my friend!!  Now, where can I get a cup like that?     Sounds like a great treat!!  

Love ya,

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Marge Tindal
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17 posted 2000-09-29 03:00 AM


Temptress~
Glad you liked it enough to want second helpings !!  

Denise~
Now isn't that the truth !

RoseBud~
Available next month in non-fattening flavors !  

LoneWolf~
Turn left at www.netpoets.com
Cozy little place on the corner ~  
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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