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To God She Did Say
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To God She Did Say |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
A little girl kneels by her cot To God she did say, Keep safe all those I love a lot. A young lady stands at the altar To God she did say, Bless our marriage don’t let our love falter. A mother holds her newborn son. To God she did say, Help him to grow as your own. A grandmother rocks her grandchild. To God she did say, Protect him from this world that is so wild. A family stood around her grave To God they did say, Thank you for all the love that she gave. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I enjoyed your poem. Nicely written. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Life is a mystery..........love perculates the heart ......the hope of love is sometimes all there is....nice jon |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I loved the unfolding of this...and neatly done, too...a pause for thought, I thank you. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Mike, Jon, Serenity Thanks for your kind words. My mother-in-law always put her family before herself. She is greatly missed. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
A life in brief. . . Excellent my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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