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If I were going to need you
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If I were going to need you |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I keep seeing this topic If I were going to need you so I couldn't resist: If I were going to need you You would hear my silent cries dashing like yesterdays dreaming, speaking to you and letting you know my very thoughts that you were never told, If I were going to need you. If I were going to need you, I would slowly pass you by and gaze at you hoping you would see my heart speaking loudly how each day without you is not a day but a night filled with sadness If I were going to need you, You would know it without me always begging for your kisses so easily you would want to share them with me simply because you couldn't resist the way we melted into one another If I were going to need you You would tell the whole world why that we were meant together with out them ever saying why If I were going to need you we would collide like two shooting stars in the sky and never come apart, suddenly there would just be a spark If I were going to need you You would fly a thousand miles just to see me smile and fall within your arms If I were going to need you would you need me too where we could stop asking that question time and time again He loves me he loves me not of course that is if I were going to need you |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Wow! Very powerful, and a wonderful way to meet the challenge.  Glad you took the time! I enjoyed this! My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Temptress, I just couldn't resist everytime I read the topics it was this! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
This is great, Temptress!...and love that ending...a subtle kicker ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thx Chanson!of course you know If I were going to you know how us women are! lol never want to give in. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So this is how it is, is it? Well, that just about says it all. Wonderful verse from you and I am sure that "he" will fall into your words and be needing you more. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Thx Mark, And he my hubby has fallen a time or two, lol. I was just inspired by this question If I were going to need you, so without a challenge even being needed had to write about . |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RoseBud~ LOOK WHAT I FOUND ! With all the marvelous poetry here ... it's hard to get to them all .... but ... I'm trying ! LOL !Love ya, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Marge you get sweeter everyday! thx gal your quite a friend, and I know what you mean with all this poetry got my eyes going round and round. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rosebud, fashionably late with this piece I see, but since it's so brilliant I'll forgive you. Great work Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Kethry I couldn't resist as I said didn't even know there was a challenge but the words just were like a magnet so had to write this down, and as long as I'm in fashion while I'm late I guess that's what most important hehe.. |
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