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Sneak Attack |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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(Sonnet - Another Fantasy) Surprise has kept our love fresh and alive So we both work hard always to contrive To find new ways to add to the loving Not be content with just turtle-doveing When you came home and couldn't find me You searched every floor, I grabbed you with glee Out of the closet came behind you quick I leaned down and gave your soft neck a lick Turning you then while your breath you caught Kissed you deeply your resistance for naught Lifting you then carried you to the bed Made love to you like the night we were wed I love sneak attacks they come back fourfold Details are secret and not to be told ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
I love this! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Wonderful. This shows a very fun part of marriage.  My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--Love this!!! |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
~*Irie claps hand like a crazy woman*~ I LOVE IT!!!!!  ~Sheri |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wil, That's one  Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Great love making needs only two assets - Love and Imagination You got it No details needed Great little poem Liz |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Seraphin- Thank you - a rare case when I only revised three times before posting Temptress - "wed" was in there because it rhymed Thanks Martie- A loyal reader and a loyal friend - thank you so much - Irie - I'm glad I could evoke such enthusiasm Thank you Kethry - Going for another hat trick Thanks Liz - And the greatest of these is Love - Thank you |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
AWWWWWW man...you are sneaky like a cat...can I play? |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Paula - so who'll be the ball of yarn? ~G~ - thanks ~S~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
OH WILFRED HOW SNEAKY THIS ONE IS BUT I FOUND IT LURKING ABOUT AND A SPLENDID READ IT IS Coco |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely written bill..love the title too.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LOL darlin...you have the right mmmmmmm attributes to be the toy... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Coco - I must thank you for resurrecting this but it knnda scares me too if you keep this up - i'll be so busy replying I won't have time to properly respond to others ~G~ Vicky- It was a fun write - I hope you had fum reading Paula - a toy? hmmm- let me think on that ~G~ thanks |
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