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An Anecdotal
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An Anecdotal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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An anecdotal Around me flows the word at large Enraging me with overcharge. A master plan of heady wine But not a master plan of mine. I do admit I am a part A debit from the very start And cannot out this world to see So therefore know not what will be. I've tried in every way I know To siphon out the secret flow But secret symbols snow my mind At least the ones that I can find. All those that rise from out this brine Alchemize a virulent wine. Each tacit taste an agony Or philosophic ecstasy. So teetotal is my surcease An anecdotal sort of peace. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'll drink to this one, Sy  |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Yep. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Only you could have written this A wonderful piece of philosophy Peace with yourself is the ultimate goal Understanding it is not important After a few drinks, it gets real peaceful Very well written, as always Liz |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ So teetotal is my surcease An anecdotal sort of peace.' And thusly ... thy cup runneth over. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, I hope you don't get drunk. Thanks Sy Mike, Thanks. Elizabeth, A kind comment and I thank you. Sy Marge, I love you too. Sy |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Never a debit, Sy... but a treasure I'll toast anytime! *S* |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sy - this is deeper than me, friend - lol. Great composition. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Thanks *L*. LngJhnAg, Thanks for the comment and read. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do believe you are, and always will be, more of an asset than a debit... Hugs... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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