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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 “Sunbath” Bathe me in the sunshine of your love… Wash me with love’s golden rays, and warm me through and through… Let me bask within the light that shimes on me from you… Bathe me in the sunshine of your love… Blow me bubbles filled with golden smiles… Blow them all around me, let them float throughout My space… Let them tickle me with love when landing on My face… Blow me bubbles filled with golden smiles… Whisper softly on a golden breeze… Send me words of love upon the waves of gentle wind… Let me know within your words that I’m more than just a friend… Whisper softly on a golden breeze… Bathe me in the sunshine of your love… Let me stand beside you in the light, for all to see… Shout to all the world of how our golden lives will be… Bathe me in the sunshine of your love…  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I am so glad that you posted this one as I have already told you how I feel about the creation of the image on top. I am so happy to see you put words to it as well. Loved the verse as much as the visual. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Mark... I was thinking about you when this fell into place....am glad you like it!! Consider it yours!!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny, Absolutely marvelous. Your artwork is stupendous and so very tender. Well written and well done Sunny. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It's a wonderful song/poem and I would LOVE to know the details of that picture on top!!!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Bill.. I'm so glad you liked this one!! It was an experiment to see if I could put my original art to my original poem. And it worked!!! Thank you for your support... I needed it !!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Mr. 'Deer'.... Well......the details, as far as viewing pleasure are totally up to your, um, imagination!! The art is my own, done on my computer and I'm hoping that it wins a contest I entered recently, along with several other pieces. Please wish me luck.........and thank you for stopping into my little gallery!!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now it is your turn to teach me. How do you design your own graphics? Will wait for your email as I am very interested. Still loveing the words you put to this 1st place work of art. Yeah, you will win!!!! Don't you know that already?  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Mark....you always say the nicest things! Yes, I'll email, and no...I'm not sure about winning, but that would certainly be nice. Thank you, and will talk to you soon!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, this is glorious, like a perfect sunny day, like you.. Your art is incredible,also, and I am sure you will win. How could you not? Sandra |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Sandra... Thank you so much for your wonderful words of support! I couldn't ask for a better 'sis'!! Talk at you soon!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sunny, if I was judging the contest you would defintely win, because this is gorgeous. Your work is always, every single time, fabulous, this is superb. You know I love it, that goes without saying, but what the heck I'll say it anyway. I LOVE THIS LITTLE BEAUTY. Okay I shouted it, but i didn't want there to be any doubt, subtle as a sledgehammer me. Take care Marsha  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I love the structure of this piece and the phrasing is exquisite Truely a beautiful poem Liz |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Liz... Thank you so much for such a nice reply!! I really am glad that you liked this poem, as it means a lot to me. I appreciate you coming by to read my words!!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sunny this is far to good to languish at the back so I'm boosting back to the top. It deserves to been seen by everyone, because it's pure joy. What the heck it's beautiful, enough said. Take care Marsha  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marsha, my friend.....you are a doll!!! I am really so glad to know someone who has such kind feelings in their heart!! Thank you, as this is probably my favorite, for sentimental reasons. (Maybe because it is warm, and things are starting to get cold otherwise!!! Thank you!!!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sis, you've got my votes...where's the ballot box? Sorry I missed this the first four-five times around...I do get to them, I do... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Sunshine... Thank you, sis....I am glad you came to take a peek!! I'm just kinda excited about this art contest I entered. Never tried anything like that before. Here's the url to the contest site, if you wanna see the rest........(I have 2 pics in "A thru E", but I'm not sure if they have them all posted yet. Keep your fingers crossed for me!) Galaxy 2000 Contest Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sunny girl...you constantly amaze me with the depths of your talented soul...your beauty shines through all your works of art. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Paula.... You don't know how much those words mean to me!! Art isn't art unless it comes from the soul of the artist, and I'm glad you can see it there. I love all forms of art, and I've found you never stop growing with it.....your art changes along with you!!! Thank you, my twin!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Sunny......I think it is a beautiful work of art and woderfully mastered use of words. Where can one find your gallery? Best of luck in the contest. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Alan... Thank you so much for your nice reply!! I'm glad that you liked this poem and picture. Actually, I don't have a gallery lined up yet. I'm in the process of trying to build a homepage just for that reason. (It's harder than I thought it would be!!) But here is the url for the contest pictures. I'm in Category A through E, although I don't think they have them all posted yet. Thank you for your support!!!!! Galaxy 2000 Contest Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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