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Raindrops dripping on ME
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Raindrops dripping on ME |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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Drip, drip dripping raindrops landing at my feet Disguising my tears as they softly meet ~~~ These tears I cry I cry for you As the raindrops drip with my tears so blue ~~~ Softly the raindrops land upon my skin The tears forming from deep within ~~~ Only the raindrops drip dripping on me Capture my tears and then I'm not free ~~~ Soon a rainbow will appear The sun will shine once more then the rain will stop from my heart sunshine will pour ~~~ Then once more I'll shine and my heart will be set free No more rain drops drip dripping on me ~~~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Drying you off I am. Wonderful verse from you tonight...or is that morning....yeah morning it is. So glad to see you in here. I don't see much of around lately. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh thats better, feeling much dryer now thanks to your towel Mark  Thanks for your wonderful reply and you were right the first time it is night time. Mark I was away for about a month and I'm slowly coming back but I don't have a real lot of time these days but I would dearly love to be in here more often for sure. See ya Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hey gator girl.... love this bittersweet piece by you.. reads like a song... well written and expressed.. and you have great timing..its pouring here right now... *smile* glad to see you postng more regular again thanks for the sweet replies to my posts later-need-an umbrella gator  jm |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
well my clock shows after midnight so I count that as morning. LOL....Did I tell you that it was so very nice to see you back here. Come back whenever you can and I do understand that things in real life are more important so we will light a candle or two and leave them in the windows for you. Came back to add to file. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nice account of how the tears come..and how they go...  well written..glad the sunshine came out  hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Rainbows only follow the rain...so sad but true. This was excellent work Tracie, the flow of this piece was super and the message and feeling in it poured down like the rain...to my library this must go, to remind that into every life a little rain must fall but if we look....so does sunshine and rainbows. (*Hugs*) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Tracie66, Thank you for letting me know about this writing. I like it, and you have written with much tenderness. Another way, of looking at the raindrops. Bill |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
So nice to have you back tracie. . . this is one of the reasons that I missed you! Just wonderful my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I love poems that end on a hopeful note! Very good, Tracie! Denise |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Janny I'm glad to be back as well and hey glad to know that it's pouring on the otherside of the world as well, when I posted this is was teaming down here in Victoria Australia  Thanks for being you hon appreciate your comments and taking the time to drop in.Love to you Tracie~ Dear Mark You are such a sweetie...thanks for coming back a 2nd time Tracie~ Hi dg Yeah I think we just need to know that how dark and dreary our world can get that eventually some light will form and warm us. Thanks for your comments Tracie~ Hey sweet butterflies Such tender words you give me...thanks hon I hope you can see and feel the sunshine starting to form in your life Take care little one Love tracie~ Bill Thanks for your lovely comments and for dropping by to read mine, you know I loved your poem on the rain. Tracie~ Dear Sven such a sweet reply Luv ya Tracie~ Denise~ I'm so glad you liked this, thanks for reading and replying. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Tracie my sweets,...glad to read your work again. This sings to me. Especially love the last part. Then once more,....*sigh*,...no more rain drops drip, dripping on me. This is what I needed. Thanks for always stopping in on my words, I love when you're around. Take care T. *Peace. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Tracie This is gr8888! I love the depth of emotion you put into this one. Also the whole rhythm of this piece is quite cool. You have an excellent talent tracie and i stand in awe. thanks so much for your inspiring words on my work. it means a lot! take care, amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Little spits Hello there Thanks for those wonderful compliments and for reading and replying I'm so pleased you like this one and I'll be reading more of your's, waiting in anticipation. I'll see you later Tracie~ Little aimster Thanks for the lovely words you sent my way and hey you know your a pretty talented poet yourself...see ya Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
This was a very sweet poem. I love the the thought of a rainbow. Rainbows=good promises. I am many. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hey Tracie, me casa sou casa. We come from the same place and have similar ideas. I really like what you did with this. BTTT. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Tracie...the rain and then the rainbow...James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
siofra~ Hi Glad you liked my poem, yes promises there is always a light at the end of the tunnel just takes a little while to realize sometimes. Thanks hon Tracie~ Hey Kethry my little down under friend, well I never!! Where abouts in Oz are you from ?? Glad you liked my poem See ya Tracie~ James~ Hello there Thanks for your comments, glad you liked the picture I painted. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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