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Tennessee Angel
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 661
Tennessee

0 posted 2000-09-24 11:01 PM


Try as I may...
I am unable to
recall my life
before I had you.

Crazy as it seems...
I can't remember the time
when I was alone
and you were not mine.

Was I even alive
before we met?
I don't think I was,
or at least I forget.

A sweeter voice
n'er touched my ear.
How did I survive
without you near?

Time began when
I looked in your eyes
and saw how they shone
like stars in the sky.

I use to wonder
but not anymore.
Matters not to my heart
what happened before.


© Copyright 2000 Stacy - All Rights Reserved
CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 685
USA
1 posted 2000-09-24 11:02 PM


Wonderful piece angel....I loved it.

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2000-09-25 07:36 PM


Tennessee Angel,
                the past is the past
                the future is the future
                the present is now. . . open it up!

Just wonderful my friend. . . just wonderful. . . may you always have this affliction  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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