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CMGrimm
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0 posted 2000-09-24 10:57 PM


What can I do
to make the world
fall in love with me?

Can I put my words on paper
bind and distribute them
for all the world to read,
and hope, by some slim chance,
I can touch someone's soul?




Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



© Copyright 2000 Christopher M. Grimm - All Rights Reserved
Tennessee Angel
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1 posted 2000-09-24 11:09 PM


That's all any of us can hope for!!  What a lovely piece!!  
Rosebud1229
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2 posted 2000-09-24 11:11 PM


beautiful words, look forward to more.
CMGrimm
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3 posted 2000-09-24 11:15 PM


Thanks Tenessee Angel and rosebud...
best of wishes to you both

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



Denise
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4 posted 2000-09-24 11:22 PM


That's what we all hope for...to touch someone's soul. You've done that many times!

Denise

CMGrimm
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5 posted 2000-09-24 11:28 PM


thanks denise.....that truly means very much to me...

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



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6 posted 2000-09-24 11:31 PM


We can try, Chris...sometimes it happens. That's one of the beauties of poetry  
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7 posted 2000-09-24 11:59 PM


ChrisG~
Yeahhhhhhh ... we can !
I like the thought of this.
So nice to see you.
Keep writing, hon.
I'll always be here to read.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vlraynes
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8 posted 2000-09-25 12:30 PM



Chris-
   this is what we all hope for, and YES,
   we certainly can.    thanks for
   sharing this.  

   -vicky



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



CMGrimm
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9 posted 2000-09-25 12:42 PM


thanks vicky, marge and balladeer...

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



Temptress
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10 posted 2000-09-25 02:46 AM


I love these kind of thoughts. They are the ones I ponder daily.   I believe not only that we can do what you ask, but that we do it every day here at Passions. Whether we realize it or not, many many people read here. I am sure someone has been touched in more than one way.
tracie66
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11 posted 2000-09-25 02:49 AM


Chris~
Beautiful poetic words here....well done
keep writing you have a wonderful soul  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


dgvarner
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12 posted 2000-09-25 03:05 AM


to touch a soul...as has been said, thats all we can hope for    
i havent seen you around lately--i've been in the wrong place i guess  

love this little ditty cm

hugs, dg


theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper

CMGrimm
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13 posted 2000-09-25 07:30 AM


THANKS dg, tracie, and temptress..

no, I haven't been around much lately...been really busy with a theatre group here locally and their fall productions.  But things are winding up and i will probably be here a little more often now...I hope.

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



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