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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 2000-09-24 10:21 PM


Earthen, primal beat
pounding against smoky shadows
that curl softly
upon dark, metallic walls.

Sweat sparkles
upon curves of hypnotic skin
as limbs move faster
almost flying
through swells of endless rhythm.

Lucid strands
of silver-purple haze
tie lazy bows through the air
while the music howls
from swells of soulful darkness.

And the sound rages on...

Raw, starkly vivid emotion
throbs almost psychotically
through my spirit
and I know that I’m helpless
to control myself
as long as the primal beat
commands.
  



*Krista Knutson*

"Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious

© Copyright 2000 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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1 posted 2000-09-25 03:00 AM


Very powerful. I have felt like this before. It is a commanding feeling.  Enjoyed the read.


My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-09-25 03:22 AM


OOOHHHHH Im gonna tell LOL
hey now girlie girl..
im not the only one feeling "skin tight"
hey I LOVE THIS...
its like cajun spicey...very nicey LOL
my my my ...
Little Miss K, is all inspired and growing up on us..
and we wouldnt have it any other way *smile*
later-feel the beat gator
jm

Alwye
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In the space between moments
3 posted 2000-09-25 08:55 PM


Temptress- It is indeed a commanding feeling, thanks for reading!  

JM- LOL, yeah I'm growing up somewhat....got a ways to go yet though I think.  I'm glad you liked this and glad to see you around a bit!  I miss ya!  


*Krista Knutson*

"Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious

Dark Angel
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4 posted 2000-09-25 09:06 PM


Krsta, loved this very much especially the last stanza  



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