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BreyerRose
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since 2000-08-12
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Easton, Pa USA

0 posted 2000-09-24 10:01 PM




Sometimes at night I wake from sleep.
My dream still lingers, strong and deep.
I lie and concentrate on it,
This memory I want to keep.

It's just a dream, I realize
But I can still see those blue eyes.
Looking deeply it seems to me
They are of bright, crystal skies.

It's just a dream, I can't erase
Yet I get lost in your embrace,
I feel so safe and so at peace
A feeling that I can't replace.

It's just I dream, oh yes, I know
Yet I feel your kiss soft and slow.
My lips are moist with your sweet taste.
And my feelings begin to grow.

It's just I dream, I know that's true
And now I know not what to do
Except to lie here all alone
Hoping you know that I love you.

I love you.


Hugs and Kisses,
Paula


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Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
1 posted 2000-09-24 10:08 PM


Great work Breyer.  It realy sucks not to be able to be close to the one that  you love.  Ive had many moments like the one you describe.  Great writing.


Keith

BreyerRose
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Easton, Pa USA
2 posted 2000-09-24 10:14 PM


Thank You Keith.  Love does suck sometimes, but it's all worth it in the end.  Thanks again.

Hugs and Kisses,
Paula


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3 posted 2000-09-25 07:40 PM


Excellent BryerRose. . . the yearning is evident in this one. . .

And yes, love does suck sometimes. . . but if we believe, like you said. . . it'll all be worth it in the end. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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