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0 posted 2000-09-24 09:59 PM



Lost In The Haze

A swirl of memories from long ago
Dance around me, engulfing my thoughts
Shadows of things that happened
Hunt me down, haunting my heart
I want to run away, the pain overwhelming
But I am too lost in the haze to find my way
I struggle to find that elusive escape
Only discovering more phantoms waiting
To refresh the anguish that numbs me
So here I stand.. quiet.. unable to reach out
Unable to share this burden
Knowing it is my only release
Now I stand here.. my hands over my ears
My eyes closed…my heart sealed
Holding on the best I can to reality
Holding on to dimming faith that I will find my way


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1 posted 2000-09-24 10:17 PM


Rosepetals25
  We all get lost in the haze sometimes.  I'm currently lost myself.  I believe the key is to retrace your steps and you will be able to walk out the same way you walked in.  But if a bird has eaten your popcorn, then it could be a problem   Always forge on, you'll eventually come out on the other side. do not stand and wait for someone to find you.
  Excellent poem by the way.< !signature-->

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2 posted 2000-09-24 10:55 PM


ggrn3 - First I have to apologize..lol.  I posted the poem and had to go offline.. when I came back.. I saw all the mistakes I made..hehe.  Thank you for stopping in. I'm glad you liked it.  I will find my way out..unfortunately I am used to dealing with these shadows and phantoms.
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