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Wesley the Blue
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Forest Lake, MN, USA

0 posted 2000-09-24 09:32 PM


Sorry for posting accross forums, but I posted this one in Open #9 without realizing that that forum was being replaced.  I thought Id put it out where the rest of the traffic is.  Once again, sorry for cross posting.


Tears come unbidden to these eyes
My heart calls out and for you cries
That I might touch you and hold you near
The one that I call “Abrabear” and “Dear”

The days that have come and past
Your love I have held unto fast
The days that are yet to be
Will be hard for you and me

Miles have come and stepped between
Life can be so cruel and mean
To pull the two of us so far apart
After we stole one another’s heart

In this cold and dark twilight time
Ill wrap myself in your thought and rhyme
And warm myself by your loves fire
Dreaming of her, my greatest desire

© Copyright 2000 Keith W. Mullin - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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In the space between moments
1 posted 2000-09-24 10:44 PM


Being separated from the one you love is indeed painful....well written, with lots of emotion....I liked it!  

*Krista Knutson*

"Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
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2 posted 2000-09-24 10:54 PM


I'll wrap myself in your though and rhyme,
very beautiful! I'm sorry for your tears

Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
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Forest Lake, MN, USA
3 posted 2000-09-25 01:12 PM


Thanks to both of you.  The tears are twofold.  One for the pain at being separated from the one I love, and out of joy for having someone special enough to make it so dang painful.  Thanks again.

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


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