Heart Tears...Mark's Challenge

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MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

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0 posted 2000-09-24 09:23 PM

                My.........heart
           is flooded, reigning tears
          to cleanse...a well-worn soul.
        Pieces  floating....of the years,
            boxed treasures, memories
             old... Collected in the
                better times and
                    saved to
                      ....
           ..
          rum-
          mage
         through
        When-ever
         moments
         needed
          lift,              to
                            savor
                          thoughts
                          of...YOU.
                        Upon a shelf
                         is..framed
                          the day
                            when

     ..
    first,
   we..two
  were..one.
  Placed now
behind, I hide
the present...
  with words
  that said
    we're            ..
                    done.
                  Today my
                 tears, your
                 shoulder wet,
                 releas..ing
                  more from
                    ..me..

             though.....comfort-
          ing, you tried once more,
         never again...shall be, "I
        hate this  process", I said
          this morn, "I can barely
            stand the pain", hug-
             ging me and said,
                  "I know"
                     my

                             ...
                            heart
                         tears began
                        to reign. What
                          can one do
                            but try
                             ....

      ..to..
      toughen
    the softness
    of memories,
     You...are
      for the
        ....                  mo-
                             ment
                          still view-
                         ed, everyday
                        in mind's eye,
                         but no longer
                           are "WE".

MM
9 *2k

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-09-24 11:04 PM

Well done, Maureen! Very creative! Challenge well met!

Denise

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

2 posted 2000-09-24 11:05 PM

Great poem!
This is a fun challenge to see
all this poetic art.
May your heart heal friend.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2000-09-25 01:35 AM

I know that the tears are real for you at this moment and that makes this even more special to me. You have met my challenge well and I thank you for that. Your verse as always is superb. Now a little something for you to enjoy hopefully.
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MMoonchild
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4 posted 2000-09-26 08:01 AM

Denise...thank you...I always love a good challenge

insect...your kind words..help the healing...just a bit sensitive at the moment..what am I saying..I'm always sensitive

Mark..thank you also for the challenge and I loved the guitar..I couldn't possibly think of enough words to write to express myself like that..you are lots of fun doubly smiling

Maureen

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2000-09-26 08:12 AM

Maureen,
it's your hearts tears that reach out to me at passions. *HuG*
Kethry.

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

MMoonchild
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6 posted 2000-09-26 02:44 PM

Kethry

it's those "hugs" that I keep reaching for

thank you
Maureen

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

7 posted 2000-10-13 02:04 PM

MOON, how could I not have caught this one anyhow the presentation is divine but the expression is breathtaking...

I apologize for my tardy response and I must say this poem I shall hold as one of your best that I have been fortunate to read...
It kinda touches upon my life and I thank you for such a great read.

Coco

MMoonchild
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8 posted 2000-10-13 03:35 PM

Coco I thank you for reaching into the archives and bringing me back to life...

~~soft hugs
Maureen

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