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Sail on (Mark's challenge)
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Sail on (Mark's challenge) |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
 Tosail across memories of every past event beautiful and dark alike seeing, learning, experiencing letting the wind to take the lead across an ocean so vast of unknown tugging at the sails when winds get rough always accepting the uncertainties of the sea at sunset's colorful rainbow to rest and breath all the colors in deep in love with the beauty that lies beyond the horizon ^^^^^^^^^^ in love with the ever changing and unpredictable ocean of life ^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 09-24-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kat~ That is sooooooooo creatively WONDERFUL ! Beautiful phrases billow your sails. I LOVE IT ~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Excellent my Purr Purr! This is so beautiful. I love this. May I sail with you? |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Kat, you'll notice a couple of layers of waves in your poem..it was hanging off the page so I edited it a bit..hope you don't mine.  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
An A+ and some extra credit as well as I just LOVE THE SEA....you did an outstanding job and I am so impressed. Thank you so much for taking my challenge and setting sail with it. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Kat, You sailed away with the prize in this one. Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sailing this one back across this sea of poetry. It clearly passes the finish line with style !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
kat- love this! so creative and so beautiful. you've done an awesome job on this. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Kat, I'm so envious of this ability...you guys just keep taking it a step beyond...wonderful work! (I've really got to read the manual sometime...lol) |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Marge: You have given me such a big compliment, not only once but twice. Thanks so much! I'm thrilled that you loved it! insect: Excellent? Beautiful? You love it? Thanks so much for that! With all those compliments how can I possibly say no. Yes..lets go sailing but first. Um..have you gone sailing before and do you know how to control the sails? After all, with all the forecasts you've been writing, I'd be a little nervous with someone that doesn't have any experience. lol Poet deVine: No ofcourse I don't mind. After all I don't want the waves spilling off the page now do I? Thanks! Mark: An A+? Wow! Thanks! Well I just loved this challenge. I had a great time with it and I also love the sea. Thanks again! Kethry: Thanks so much! I'm glad you loved it! Vicky: I'm glad you found it beautiful and awesome. Thanks! serenity: Well to tell you the truth. I was envious too when I first saw insect post his rainbow poem. I was amazed and thought I'd give it a shot and found that I had more then a little trouble with it. Then I decided to really read the info on here and that was it. After days of non sleep or eating or anything, I came up with this little thing. kidding.. LOL Actually I loved the challenge and I was determined. So after reading and trying it a few times I finally got the hang of it. Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks! Sorry I took so long to reply to your posts. I haven't been here for a while so It's catch up time for me. Thanks to all of you for your compliments! kat [This message has been edited by kat (edited 10-12-2000).] |
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