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Yesterday's Song |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Yesterday's Song ~*Marge Tindal*~ Where are you my love What songs do you sing Who captures your notes When the melodies ring Love is devine Lilting song that you croon Long after the loving Long after the moon Always be joyful Alight with new tune After the loving After the moon Take time to remember The tune to the song The melody will linger The longer he's gone You can sing him back You can bring him home Yesterday's memory sings Yesterday's song ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
The memory is a wonderful thing. The tune can erase years. Thank you for a very nice memory. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hugs. No smarty pants reply on this one...loved it, Marge. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
INot~ Thank you for the sweet reply. Welcome to Passions. Serenity~ That's it ! ! I'm taking your temperature ! ! !  Love you oodles and oodles ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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bebo Junior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 12 |
what wonderful memories you must have. maybe tomorrow will bring yesterday back. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Marge! Denise |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Fantastic Marge...now I remember why I was missing this place so much. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- this is so beautiful.  i just love it.(((hugs))), -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BeBo~ The memories are wonderful. Glad to share ... Thank you. Denise~ My thanks to you for always being around, gal. ChrisG~ Ah-ha ! Wondered where you've been. Glad you're back and I thank you. You've got LOTS of catching up to do ! Vicky~ Thank you, my friend. Now fix that profile so we can get to your web site ! ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 09-24-2000).] |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Ah, what a peaceful flow this one has! Lovely piece, Marge!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ Thanks ever so much. Good to see you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
OMG, in my untyped, unposted, hand-written archives, I've got one very similar to this, done years and decades ago...I'm going to have to pull it out and send it to you... you're simply amazing... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Now, Ms. Sunshine ... does that really surprise you ?? I'll be looking forward to it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Marge..... You reached out and grabbed this musician's soul with this one!! How wonderful in it's thought and beautiful in it's images.........  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Marge - I will NEVER fail to read you. Every time I do You touch me in such beautiful ways. - This time your memories resurrected mine ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Very beautiful.......you sure have a way of "touching" your readers...I enjoyed this. Jenn E |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnificent Marge merges magical music. I love this Marge I really do.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ Oh, thank you. Yeah, it's a 'singer' ! Wilfred~ Well, alright then ! Thank you. Glad to 'touch' memories. JennE~ I thank you. If I 'touch' someone ... my mission is complete. Marsha~ Thanks for that alliterated reply. Cool, gal ! Thank you. *I hope you ALL know how easy you make it for me to want to continue writing ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is a classic - music, beat and lyrics... now to hear you sing... regards, sudhir |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Love is devine Lilting song that you croon Long after the loving Long after the moon Music, romance, and the moon...what more could we ask for...love this one, Marge! Robert Joseph |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
cool first letter thing goin on there..i especially am in love with he second stanza yuh's |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Good write and wonderful message! Within each favorite song, we'll find a memory, if we chose not to remember, it will be our lost.....loved this one! Marcy |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marge... Ditto to what Sudhir sayz this one is realllllll sweet!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge This is more of a song than a poem. And a lovely song at that I can almost hear the melody Liz |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely said Marge..hopefully the melodies of memories linger echoing to one anothers, no matter how far away they are... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Everyone is singing and I just love it, music and poetry are so inter-related, Marge you make me sing! Kathleen |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Marge this is a great tune and your words are so very true! Enjoyed this fabulous piece. Nathan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Soooooo good to see you, my friend. I would sing for you. RJ~ Thank you. It does encompass all those things. Walt~ How cool of you to notice .... and if I'd arranged them acrostically, I could have done W A L T Y ! Darn .... wish I'da thunk of it !  Marcy~ So pleased to see you. Thank you. Dani~ Thank you, sweet lady. Elizabeth~ You listen real good, my friend. Victoria~ Thank you so much for the reply. Kathleen~ I'm pleased to hear you sing. Nate, my friend~ Thank you so very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Many of my songs include the beauty of spirit in your friendship and I have many to choose from for happy memories of you and all you have meant to me. Lovely write my friend and as my sis said, maybe tomorrow will bring you yesterday's song in the abundance of a thousand angels singing. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Thank you, sweetheart ... and all you mean to me. Love you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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