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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
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North Carolina

0 posted 2000-09-24 07:23 PM


My lips hold your kiss
upon them, so easily,
I can feel the softness
as your lips meet mine
I knew I was lost in time
with your simpliest kiss
so devine
stars lit up the sky
as you hold me near
heaven opened up
and I heard the angels sing
as we danced beneath the moon
my lips met your lips
It seemed as I were in a dream
Though I thought I was prepared
This was something that was rare
when your lips met mine.


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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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1 posted 2000-09-24 08:11 PM


"My lips hold your kiss
upon them so easily."
I have met women and the first time I kissed them it was like we had been kissing for a lifetime...James

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-09-24 08:18 PM


RoseBud~
Beautiful opening line.
Just lovely.
~*Marge*~


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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
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North Carolina
3 posted 2000-09-24 10:50 PM


jmlee it is so true that you can tell how a person feels from their kiss.
Marge, thank you my dear friend !

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-09-25 01:24 AM


I like taking the bottom lip and .....well never mind....you don't want to know anyway.LOL.....Just lovely in verse and flow. I love how the lips will hold certain kisses.  Sort of gives you and idea of the passion within one.
Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
5 posted 2000-09-25 12:56 PM


ah! Watch it there cowboy!!

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Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
6 posted 2000-09-25 01:21 PM


I love them type of kisses..... the ones where you dont know who or where your are when your done.......  ahem anyway.  Nice poem.

Keith

Rosebud1229
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7 posted 2000-09-25 01:34 PM


Me to Keith! When you see rockets varooooooom!!
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