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Chanson
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2000-09-24 06:34 PM

o
o
o
Drink all of me, my offering's Chablis
Love droplets dripping from my soul
Wet your thirst, quenching dry
Make supple your moist seed
Sip my drops, sate caverns
Deep with body's wine
Absorb my wet
Sate
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On My
Sweet Chablis

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...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

[This message has been edited by chansondegeste (edited 09-25-2000).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-09-24 07:17 PM

Chanson~
Beautifully done.

The poetic thoughts and the design~
Rare vintage~

I LOVE IT ~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

2 posted 2000-09-24 07:20 PM

Thank you, Marge!
It didn't turn out exactly the way I wanted it to but I'm kinda HTML stupid. hehehe

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

insect
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since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

3 posted 2000-09-24 11:24 PM

WOW!
This is beautiful!
Cheers!

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

4 posted 2000-09-24 11:40 PM

Hi insect. Thank you!

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-09-25 01:39 AM

Chanson~
WELL .... I came back for a sip ...
and now I REALLY love it !
Nice work, gal !
Let's splash this bubbly to the TOP !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

6 posted 2000-09-25 02:08 AM

YOU know.....I read this earlier and was saving it for a midnight sip...sort of need one once in awhile.....and you know what. I think I drank tooooo much of it earlier because it didn't have as much color.LOL....am I going "MORE" nuts than I already am. This is BEAUTIFUL and the verse itself....well you dont even want to know where MY mind went with this one.LOL......Tis a superb verse and challenge met well beyond well.

Oh yeah....loved the shade of lipstick as well

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-25-2000).]

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

7 posted 2000-09-25 08:06 AM

After seeing all the poets intricate designs and use of color I realized mine looked blase, that it needed something. What it needed was LESS wine! *LOL* So I took an indelicate gulp. Sorry about the lipstick stain.

Marge, thank you for the second visit. Fill 'er up please

Mark, this was a cool challenge. The more I worked on getting the color right the more I drank. So you aren't going crazy BUT I'll share it, giving you a clean glass of course

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...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

[This message has been edited by chansondegeste (edited 09-25-2000).]

Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

8 posted 2000-09-25 12:33 PM

A toast to you........this was great!!!

Jenn E

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

9 posted 2000-09-25 02:45 PM

Hello Jenn. Thank you ! *clink*

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

10 posted 2000-09-25 09:01 PM

Am I the only one to see this as not only beautiful but

???
I'll never look at a glass of chablis the same way ever again.
Wonderful poem Chanson

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

11 posted 2000-09-25 09:44 PM

Wil...so the next time you see a glass of wine it will look like a hot toddy?
hehehehehe

Once again, you reply so kindly.
Thank you!

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...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

[This message has been edited by chansondegeste (edited 09-25-2000).]

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

12 posted 2000-09-26 07:06 AM

Chanson,
drink to me only... this sparkling piece of bubbly refreshed my soul.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

13 posted 2000-09-26 07:34 AM

Wow! Wonderful Chanson ... an excellent picture to set the mood of your content .. beautifully done! (loved the lipstick touch!)

Best wishes,
/Kit

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

14 posted 2000-09-26 07:43 AM

Hello Kethry...
Happy you feel refreshed!
Thank you

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

15 posted 2000-09-26 08:46 AM

Hi Kit!
If you saw it before I edited, it was just a boring glass. It needed life so I added lips.

Thanks !!

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

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