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My Creed |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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This is my hand I give to you, To lift you when your down please understand I'll need yours too, when I am on the ground. This is my heart I give to you, so handle it with care. For when you start to give yours too, Everything we will share. This is my trust I give to you, so hold it as your own. Do what you must too see it through, and never be alone. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is nice writing...James |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
this is a truly magnificentpiece of writing. the from is totally awesome and unique. i've never seen such a style. great work here. Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin~ Enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Nice work, I can realy identify with it. That kind of bond with someone doesnt come around just everyday. Cherish it. Keith |
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