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Corinne
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0 posted 2000-09-24 03:28 PM


Arpeggio and Staccato

A tenor to my soprano
I am breathy, you bellow -
A voice low and legato,
Mine a spray of staccato.
So many opuses you know,
My songs, never apropos.

A serenade beneath my window
Dreamt of a timbre largo
The window was non aperto,
Would you take it from Da Capo?
Could we harmonize in tempo,
Arpeggio and staccato?

© 2000 Corinne Bailey


[This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 09-24-2000).]

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insect
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1 posted 2000-09-25 12:41 PM


WOW!
This sounds so beautiful!
I love it.

Wilfred Yeats
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2 posted 2000-09-25 12:55 PM



Love soprano yet
Sonorous and legato
my bass not tenor

I enjoyed this ~S~

Corinne
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3 posted 2000-09-25 02:50 PM


Thanks, Insect and Wilfred!

Corinne

Parker
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4 posted 2000-09-26 09:48 AM


Corinne, very interesting use of these musical terms.... so your breathy and I bellow.... hmmmmmm.  


Park

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5 posted 2000-09-26 10:31 AM


A true harmony to the ears and eyes...lovely work  
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