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Sven
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0 posted 2000-09-24 02:24 PM


It's hard to know what to call this feeling isn't it?
You're not sure that you want to call it. . . you know. . .
Not really ready to put that label on it yet
For fear that it might be too soon
Timing is everything here you know. . .
And believe me, I do
Things will be going along so well and then you blurt out. . . you know. . . and then where are you?
It's pretty scary. . .

But here's what you do know. . .
You think about him day and night
You see him in your dreams
You smile more when you're around him
His voice makes you weak
His heart is good
His sprit makes you feel better
You can't wait for him to call
He makes you feel special
You give to him. . . and he gives to you. . .

So. . .is it really. . . you know?. . .
It could be. . .
                      if it is. . .
                                      you'll know. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
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PanDol
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1 posted 2000-09-24 02:30 PM


Sven,
If I didn't know better, I'd say you reached right into my heart and pulled these
"you knows" right out of me!
This one is a true gem to me, it hits very close to home!
And I know.......but I fear!  
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~PanDol



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juliet_2u
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2 posted 2000-09-24 03:13 PM


I can sure relate to this one Sven. Can really be scary huh? Very well expressed my friend.
Juls


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ggrn3
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3 posted 2000-09-24 03:59 PM


Sven  
  Very well written.  I'm sure that all the ladies want to know this feeling. They want the one that makes them feel special with a voice that makes them weak.  There are men out there like that and it's you and I of whom I speak.

Garfield

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2000-09-24 04:11 PM


"Do you know" how I feel about your wonderfully romantic writings Sven? Beautiful!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Temptress
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5 posted 2000-09-25 03:03 AM


Very enjoyable poem.   It simply couldn't be...YOU KNOW...when all that happens..could it?


My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber.

dgvarner
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6 posted 2000-09-25 03:11 AM


sven! this is so cute     heehee..

i love the way this reads.. its so ...you know..unsure..but pretty sure..but..well..

lol

love this    
hugs, dg


theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper

Marina
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7 posted 2000-09-25 01:01 PM


I think everyone can relate to this feeling at some point in their lives.  Very well written Sven.  There is nothing more scarer then facing this moment, but not wanting to label it just yet.

Great write, my friend

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



Sven
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8 posted 2000-09-25 01:11 PM


PanDol. . . so, you're in this place eh?  It is scary I know. . . sometimes, you just have to go with it. . . thank you my friend. . .

Juls, it can be scarier than you know!  Thank you my friend. . .

Garfield, yes, there are men like us out there. . . and most of them are here!     Thank you. . .

Kit, I have a good idea!     Thank you my friend. . .

Temptress, thank you. . . and if it isn't. . . you know. . . then what is it??  

dg, well, um. . . thanks. . . I mean. . .um. . . thank you. . . um. . . yeah that's it. . . um. . . LOL    

Marina, so, tell us. . . what do you do when you face this moment?  lol     Thank you my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


tracie66
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9 posted 2000-10-03 07:01 AM


Yes you will certainly know  
I like this very much Sven, so I'm sending back to the top
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Tears_of_Grace
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10 posted 2000-10-03 07:32 AM


Ya, sometimes it's nice just to know, other times we need to hear it.  This was really good.
Waverly917
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11 posted 2000-10-04 05:56 PM


I know...that feeling... and you did a beautiful job reminding me of what it feels like when ...that feeling... first comes.  

Abra

"So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains
And we never even know we have the key."
-Already Gone, The Eagles

Sven
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12 posted 2000-10-04 06:44 PM


tracie, thank you my friend. . .  

Tears of Grace, I know that I like it better when you just know. . . but it's nice to hear it too!  Thank you. . .

Abra, glad that I could bring back some memories for you. . . thank you. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Martini
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13 posted 2000-10-04 06:54 PM


The feeling may be scary, and make you extremely unsure.... but it's such a great feeling

very well written  
I enjoyed this soooo much

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

linda munday
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14 posted 2000-10-04 08:19 PM


Hi Sven,
It's a really delightful poem, capturing the essence of new love..... oops...did I say that word?  
Anyway, I really liked it... sigh..I remember when..... voice trailing off.
It must be l**e
Linda Munday

passing shadows
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15 posted 2000-10-05 02:46 AM


I think I might be too old to know...because I haven't known for a very long time  
Charisma
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16 posted 2000-10-06 04:18 AM


you know......*wonderful poem* and I love it....you made me know,
looking forward to see more from you.

Charisma

Sven
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17 posted 2000-10-06 12:19 PM


Martini, yes it is. . . thank you  

Linda, you said it!!  Great. . . now look what you've gone and done!  LOL  Thank you my friend. . .  

Passing Shadows. . . you're never too old to know. . .  

Charisma, glad that I could help you to see. . . . thank you  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


CocoBaci
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18 posted 2000-10-06 01:00 PM



Sven, how you so well capture the innocence of... you know

I must say I enjoyed reading this style of write from you it's so charismatic... you know

And we can always rely on Sven to spin a weave of romance and mystery... you know

Bottom line my friend I really like this one... you know!


   Coco  


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Gemini
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19 posted 2000-10-06 01:08 PM


Sven-Oh what a feeling it is, such sentiments, so beautifully put, but yet can be sad at times when you know, but the other person does not feel the same.
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