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Fire and Water
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Fire and Water |
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PeterPeter Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 30British, London |
A photo I took of the sun setting over a lake in Ireland prompted me to write this, if you would like a copy, please email me. Fire and Water It’s just not possible But it looks like it to me Fire on water? Not true - Can’t be Who has the power? Creating such tricks of light If you have any doubt Wait till night The fire is not burning The waters calm So still The gift of sight is not over Go see if I am right Cast your eyes skyward On the darkest, darkest night Appreciate all you see It’s too hard to describe For a mortal such as me So much beauty abounds You‘re alive. Make the most But most of all See. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Peter~ You've written of my favorite scene ... the touching of the evening sun ... across the lake. You might enjoy this one I did on this very subject. /pip/Forum24/HTML/001282.html Can't get enough sunsets !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
PeterPeter- Very nice. You've created a beautiful picture here. Must bring this back to page one so more people can enjoy it. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Peter I enjoyed the sunset you painted in my mind, I have always wanted to go to Ireland! now I want to go even more! |
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