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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Coming ImagesCandelabra starlight awaiting over leaden skies twinkling luminous in mine eyes as I soar into your arms tonight love meweaving moon-spun memories into each thoughtful prayer bear me close within your soul as our spirits come to share hold me spin me all your dreams of desire warm me with your inner fires confide in me your secrets held while softly our lips shall meld kiss me Shall I be yours, shall you be mine all in the periphery of twilight time Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunshine, I do like your writings, you are very talented. This one I like, as it has been done so softly, at least in my eyes. Another romantic, so glad to see. Bill |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sunshine, Oh what an honor to be the first to reply. Karilea this is excellant, fantastic, and super, if I could spell that word of Mappy Poppins it would be that too. I can say it I just can't spell it, I know it begins with Super and ends with cious. Anyway it's as special as you, beautiful, take care Marsha   |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ This is just so softly done ... look at you ... glowing all over the page ! The verse holds such beautiful images. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
with a pinch of moondust and a dash of starlight she opens her heart and shines in the night. . . This is just wonderful my friend. . . it's about as delicate as the stars that shine with it. . . Just amazing. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Charles, how kind of you to come in and read and enjoy along with me...thank you... Marsha...supercalifragilisticexpialidocious, or your special will work just fine, thank you much!... Marge, a good friend told me where I could pick up some starshine, cheap...LOL...thank you dear!... Sven, only you would term this delicate, and only I can accept...thank you... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Tender touch with melded lips As two become one in twilights night Within recent memories in yonders clip Sent beyond time in tomorrow's sight Lovely verse from you my friend. I do so love the "STARS"...where did you get them LOL..... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sunshine what a wonderful piece and you've done well with the layout I love it...well done. This poem is such a tender and mystical piece which is very well written. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark, I found those stars in the same place you did...LOL...quit telling all your secrets... tracie, mystical works for me, thank you SO much for reading... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Karilea.... Oh, but we do think alike, at the same time.....ESP must run in the family! It is just that time of year, when the moon is so dominant in the sky.....a big harvest moon.....the kind that stirs man's emotions to a boiling point!! Yes....I, too love this poem of yours......funny that two 'sun' people should write about the moon on the same day!!! Love it!!!!!!!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and such a large family it is, Sunny...so glad you enjoyed... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sunshine, I am elated to have found this treasure from the past. The presentation is beautiful, the way you've weaved it seamlessly together but I gotta tell ya I just love the expression (mind you, those twinkling stars just made the read an even sweeter one)!  Coco |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Coco, thank you for the gift of bringing this back up. Readers like you are a treasure, indeed! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Sunshine, your twilight time rhyme is so pretty! Rainydays |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Rainydays...it is nice to welcome you to Passions...and I hope that you will enjoy all of the pages your eyes rest on... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
this is so heartfelt! need I tell you - you speak for me? for you do - |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I must have missed this gem when I was having computer problems. I'm glad I got the chance to see it now. This is sooooo beautiful, Karilea! Lovely! Denise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Yeats, even if my voice is only a whisper, it is nice to know that someone hears me... denise, I, too, am glad you found this one...it is a favorite...and I do so enjoy sharing my favorite things... and in answering this post, you just helped me pass the 7000 mark... thank you! < !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-05-2000).] |
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