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Bill Charles
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         “YOU AND ME AND HE”

Kiss our soft baby child, and then kiss me,
for my darling, I will always have you see…
That in your loving arms, I wanted to be all along,
       because in that very place,
             is where I belong…

We consummated this child, when we joined as one,
and out of love for each other, we named him Kenton…
A beauty he turned out to be, just like his mother,
       I know in my heart,
             that I will never want another…

This son of ours, blonde with striking blue eyes,
reminds me of you, and all of your ways…
Kind, loving and tender, and so very gracious too,
       always wanted someone,
             to love like you…

Our son is also tender, and has many of your traits,
full of life and those piercing eyes, that he assimilates…
You both have captured my heart, now I know how,
       it was when I saw the two of you,
             together just now…

Graceful like a delicate swan, you remind me of,
and I shook all over when we met, my ladylove…
I could not believe it, the luck that I had,
       when meeting you,
             unknowing that I would be his Dad…

I know that within, your love for me is true,
as mine from deep inside, is always for you…
A beautiful darling son, you have given us,
       I can say your love for me,
             has been so very unselfish…

And so I adore, the only two I have in my life,
that gives me happiness, and not any more strife…
I say from my being, directly to you and he,
       I will love and treasure both of you,
             throughout eternity…


Bill Charles


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1 posted 09-24-2000 02:04 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I like your message...James
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  Hello Bill....
               What a special poem this is...a tribute to you and she and he! It's written tenderly, with much love for your family. I wish you great joy in all that you do.........
           Sunny


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!


Bill Charles
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3 posted 09-24-2000 07:53 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Hi James,
Nice to see you. Thanks for your kind reply.


Hi Sunny,
Nice to see you. Thank you for the considerate comments about this writing. Hope you are well.
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4 posted 09-24-2000 08:07 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Bill~
Very tenderly done -
with much love and consideration.
Enjoyed.
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 09-25-2000 02:44 PM       View Profile for ddgoose   Email ddgoose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ddgoose

Bill

There is a very special love between a man and a woman when they have a child and you have captured this feeling and tenderly written the words.  

                  didi
Jenn E
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6 posted 09-25-2000 04:03 PM       View Profile for Jenn E   Email Jenn E   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenn E

Ahhhhhhhhhh (sighs) This is just beautiful.....Very tenderly written.

Jenn E
Bill Charles
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Hi Marge,
Thank you for the kind comments. Nice to see you.

Hi ddgoose,
Glad that you came by for a read. And thank you for your gracious reply.


Hi Jenn E,
I do thank you for stopping by. And thank you for the tender comments.

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Bill,

Marge was right.  This is very tender.  I am so glad that I found it.

Alison
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