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Wings Of Pegasus |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan 
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On the wings of Pegasus Into the night I soar From this land of sorrow To the land of evermore. Where dreams are lost reality And reality, but a dream. To imagine and then Experience What lies behind a screen Of lover's lies. Meet me in a canyon, Barren, save a lone plateau. That reaches to the night sky That’s where we two Shall go. And come together slowly, Don’t ask for reasons why, And slowly we shall dance In love 'Neath the desert sky. Meet me near the shoreline, Where angry waves wipe clean The golden beaches Where i desire To lay with you in my dream. Where gulls cry out in apathy For they surely do not care, About these lonely lovers, Caught up in red hair, And silver moonlight. Meet me in the future, For today is full of things, That draw me back And hold me tight In ties that bite and sting Against my skin Numbing And I can’t think of anything But soaring with you In the evermore, Riding on Pegasus' wings. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Seraphin... Welcome to Passions!  "But soaring with you In the evermore, Riding on Pegasus' wings." This piece soars through my mind with a beautiful picture. You've made yourself a great entrance here at passions. I do so love this piece. ~Sheri |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! What a wonderful first post! I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email!  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
saraphin- great first post. welcome to passions. you're gonna love it here.  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Seraphin, Welcome to Passions......your stuck with all of us now...lol This was a beautiful poem.....Sometimes the land of "evermore" is just such a nice place to go..........beautiful words here. Jenn E |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Welcome to Passions, excellent work!  Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP Most people would rather die than think; in fact, they do so. B. Russell |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
seraphin, Welcome To Passions What a first post! I can't wait to read more of your writing! I know you will like here Enjoy your stay.rp25 |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
To all, My most sincere thanks. I've been a silent presence here for some time. As a rule, I keep to the shadows. I hope to venture into the light a bit more frequently. I already know some of you, by your words. And wonderful words they surely are. Again, my thanks. @}~~~>~~~~ Sandi |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seraphin~ With thoughts that shine as brightly as these, I hope you won't remain a silent presence for long. Welcome to the posting side of Passions. Enjoy your stay with us ... as I'm sure we will enjoy you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hello Sandi Seraphim, What a lovely name and style you have with poetry. Welcome to passions, make yourself at home and enjoy your stay. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
An amazing first post, you made a grand entrance with this poem! Everything is perfect - the flow, the imagery, the thoughts, the magical essence. You should be very proud of this piece And, I like your user nameTake care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Thank you, Melissa! I'm so flattered. I just LIKE to write. |
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Richard Brooks Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 17Richardson, TX |
With thoughts like these I'll look forward to future meetings with you. Welcome friend. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Thank you, Richard. And welcome to you! One can never have too many friends! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Welcome to Passions...and what a wonderful first poem... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
woo hoo what an introduction to yourself - I've still another to measure up to now - This is so excellent - it goes with my treasures of poems I wish I'd written |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
seraphin, Welcome to Passions!! This was a wonderful first post!! I am looking forward to reading more. You have quite a talent here! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Wilfred, you already know that I am one of your fans. So your comments are twice as sweet. Thank you. Lone Wolf, I've been here but a brief time. I've read for hours, and been impressed over, and over, and over. There are some talents here that dwarf my finest efforts. I could be intimidated, or I could learn. I chose the latter. Thank you for reading my work. This is one of my personal favorites, as I have long wished to soar on Pegasus' wings. Sandi [This message has been edited by seraphin (edited 09-29-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello seraphin... I want to welcome you to Passions also, and tell you that this first post is magnificent! Here is a little something I thought you might like. If you're running Windows, just right click and 'save as' to your hard drive, and it is yours.........  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this was a very inspirational piece thank you yuh yuh |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Oh Sunny1, thank you! I love it! And thank you, too, Walt. When I first showed this piece to a friend, they told me I spent too much time with my head in the clouds. How do you explain, 'tis not my head, merely my heart. Sandi |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
This is a lovely entree into this family of friends... I'm so impressed with your poem that I intend 2 thread it in my library... Look forward to many more of your poetic rhymes... Once again welcome.. Coco |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
an outstanding entrance, seraphin! what a beautiful and ... what's the word... almost magical verse! it remined me very much of "the never-ending story". the second stanza i loved, as well as the one about the beach. very well penned. i am very glad you have decided to come share the limelight! oh and, you can never spend to much time with your head in the clouds! *WELCOME* Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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