Open Poetry #10 |
A sweet feast |
Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
To touch your firm body To caress your soft skin To absorb the essence of you To taste the moisture of your skin To feel your skin under my touch With it’s cool smoothness To feel you quiver as I kiss your hips To feel your warmth with my lips To bite you To taste your delectable juices To feel them running down my chin Is it a terrible sin To kidnap you from your home Just to make you mine For just a few minutes of messy rapture And just throw you away under an old pine For one to make a feast Out of a helpless piece It never will end So is the life of a peach |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Delicious and sensational... Superb writing... Coco |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Argh! Alan you were this close [ ] to having this moved to Adult! LOL Very cute sir. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
LMAO!!!!!! I was thinkin..Ohhhh Boyyyyy this is good but mannn is he in trouble!! GREAT TWIST in the end...........PERFECT acually!!!! I can't stop giggling here.......LOL......Man...I liked this...... LOL....maybe you should give the "Adult" section a try....you would be really good... Jenn E |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Coco thank you Poet DeVine......I will watch myself next time. Thank you for the warning. Jenn E Thank you ...I had fun doing it..But how can I be in trouble over eating a peach? hehe As for the adult section I am in there somewhere. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I don't really go for peaches, plums are quite nice fresh from the tree but even though the last line ties the piece up it is too late for my mind...half way through the second verse my mind hopped into the adult forum, now where can I get a peach tree like that...*evil grin* Wonderful poem Alan, reading it made me hor... I mean...hungry. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Oh Alan, I was disappointed, I thought you were ... eating an apple. *Laughs* Great write. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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