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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2000-09-23 10:49 PM


Thinking about Mina

I Like You
you know.
So if you like me too
we'll give it a go.
I'll give my free time to you.
Everything that I am
will be shared with you.
And if you like what you see
you can have a lifetime of me.
And if I don't fit just right
give me the word
and I'll slip from your sight.
But please don't ever
say that to me
because I want to be near you
for a long, long, time.
I will be yours
and you will me mine.
Remember how softly I told you
"I think I'm falling in Love with You."
And you said "That's good"
and I said "Only if you're falling too."
Then you replied "What do you think?"
"Well now Mina, I hope and I think
that perhaps you are falling in Love
with me too."
"Now Mina, what do you think?"
"Are my hope and my thoughts true?"

Jameslee@September23,2000



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Xeonox
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1 posted 2000-09-24 12:40 PM


Great way to present that question. Good luck!!

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



Bill Charles
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2 posted 2000-09-24 12:43 PM


Good evening James,
I have my fingers and toes crossed that this is the one that works for you. Lots of luck James.

Bill

Jenn E
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3 posted 2000-09-24 01:24 AM


I know how I would answer.....lol.....On the serious side.....what a beautiful way to ask a question......whatever the answer.....I loved how you asked it. Wishing you well....

Jenn E

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2000-09-24 02:11 PM


Thank you Xeonox, Bill, and Jenn for the nice words of encouragement...James
Mark Bohannan
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5 posted 2000-09-24 02:37 PM


I remember when you said it so softly and I am so glad to see that the Mina is still in your heart and life and by the sounds of it I would say that you my friend James are about to find the happiness you deserve.  Excellent words of tender caring from you as always.


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6 posted 2000-09-24 03:47 PM


your asking all the right questions sweet baby james...
and ya know we ladies just cant resist a whisper ..*smile* ...
your gentlemans heart shines in this ...
you know we only wish for you ...
your dreams come true ...
later-whispering-sweet-somethings-gator  
jm

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2000-09-24 06:48 PM


Thank you Mark happiness would be grand.
Janet you are the sweetest...hoping my dreams and your dreams awaken us with a gentle touch and bless us with all the beauty of this world...James

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8 posted 2000-09-25 07:45 PM


James, you know that I'm pulling for you. . . every once in a while, a woman comes along that just takes our breath away. . . seems you've found one. . .

With words like this, how could she not be yours???

Well done and good luck to you my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


JamesMichael
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9 posted 2000-09-26 07:27 AM


Sven I'm still thinking about Mina...we are spending more time together and I trust her enough to give her my heart...as I have told her I have a wonderful time when we are together and I am happy...James
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10 posted 2000-09-27 01:50 PM


This is beautiful. I wish you happiness.
JamesMichael
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11 posted 2000-09-27 03:24 PM


Thank you reject she is beautiful and I desire happiness more than anything in this world...for both of us...James
JamesMichael
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12 posted 2000-10-03 04:33 PM


For a friend.  James
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