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don't touch me please
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don't touch me please |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209
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don't touch me please I might reach back for you in want of finding me and a soft and caring touch right now is the last thing that i need i know i wear my mourning with eyes half full of tears but I don't know why and I wish I could tell us both but the words are lost to me I think I hid them to escape the responsibility I do wonder the source of so many tears and I try to reason out why some songs and driving home makes me cry why the cold wind that takes away the green makes me want to give up trying and why these days my smiles are so hard to find but each time the overfilling tears are more than I can take and so I blink them back and with a shrug of my mouth and my shoulders I go back to working too hard so please don't touch me not now a soft and caring touch is the last thing that I need. In want of finding me I might reach back for you and find the honesty in me [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 09-25-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
No, thank YOU, Corazon for your fabulous insight into human emotions. I know what you mean, I think. The dam can look solid but one small crack can bring it tumbling down  |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
This is a really deep and touching poem. I thank you for sharing it with us.  Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Corazon, you've shared with us a great poem and I find this to be an exceptional piece of poety... Coco |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This very deep and pulls on the heart strings....I think all can relate to this at one time or another.....Very good write.... Warm Smiles Jenn E |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I do wonder the source of so many tears and I try to reason out why some songs and driving home makes me cry why the cold wind that takes away the green makes me want to give up trying and why these days my smiles are so hard to find but each time the overfilling tears are more than I can take and so I blink them back and with a shrug of my mouth and my shoulders I go back to working too hard so please don't touch me not now a soft and caring touch is the last thing that I need. In want of finding me I might reach back for you and find the honesty in me ================== yet we live and breathe in the moments of needing that touch... awesome reflections Cor, awesome take care... jm |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading this...James |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
excellent writing! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Great poem Corazon...those last lines really hit me. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thank you all so much, you guys just don't know how much this place and the poets here mean to me........big hugs to all |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
This is a beautifully written poem, it's so deep. Take care, my thoughts are with you, and if you ever need a shoulder to cry on, please feel free. Marsha warm hugs and soft smiles |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Corazon, I love reading your poetry. You put so much of your heart and soul into it. How often have I felt the very emotions you wrote about in this piece? Too many. Those times when we know that we will collapse with the simplest, softest touch are the times when we need it the most. ((((Corazon)))) Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Corazon, I felt the need to read this one more time today I trust no1 will mind but back to the top for this great rhyme! Coco |
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